Astolfo Posted May 20, 2014 Report Share Posted May 20, 2014 I think this is my first actual dedicated attempt at sigs in a while, and I'm pretty sure the rust/lack of skill/etc shows. But anyways, reviews please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted May 20, 2014 Report Share Posted May 20, 2014 The light is weird since it seems to be coming out the wood, and it doesn't look right to be the sun peaking through or something because usually there'd be some minor silhouettes. The kid is a sore thumb because the lighting on him is completely different than the background and he's too bright. The murky thing in front doesn't look too good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 20, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2014 Thanks for the review. It stings a bit, but I didn't expect much, after such a long lapse. I'll take the advice into mind for future sigs. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted May 20, 2014 Report Share Posted May 20, 2014 I think this is my first actual dedicated attempt at sigs in a while, and I'm pretty sure the rust/lack of skill/etc shows.But anyways, reviews please.PFFT U IDEA STEALER (that I stole from yondaime but shhhh)I like the concept but the execution is kinda off. The light doesn't have an actual source, it just kinda comes from the trees, and the focal is kinda blurry so it makes my eyes go towards the light, instead of the focal. The depth is alright, although it could've been pulled off better. The difference between the sharpened part and the blurred part of the background is too sudden. It changes from really sharpened to really blurred right next to each other, instead of gradually getting more blurry which it should be. The atmo is pretty nice, but I feel that if the blur was changed to gradual it would've been a lot better. Overall it's a nice piece and concept, but the execution could've been a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 20, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2014 thanks bby I noticed I misjudged the lighting after a few tired hours, and then I was just like, eh, whatever. But I'll do it better again maybe, or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted May 20, 2014 Report Share Posted May 20, 2014 thanks bbyI noticed I misjudged the lighting after a few tired hours, and then I was just like, eh, whatever.But I'll do it better again maybe, or something.Can I see the psd/xcf? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 29, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2014 http://www.filedropper.com/lastorder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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