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Madsen Posted May 3, 2014 Report Share Posted May 3, 2014 Is that a .gif or has not sleeping for a few days started taking it's toll? Anyway, pretty dope tag. Overall the potential here is huge and that stands out, the color scheme could be brilliant if you did something similar on the left like the orange part, maybe like a cyan or something (because THAT combo totally hasn't been whored out since 08). Otherwise you've got a really nice lock on fundamentals, lightning is pretty good and you're honestly getting much better with depth than before. The flow is kinda funky because the way the tag is structured doesn't allow for it and the left side of the tag is kind of washed out. Generally though a really nice tag, keep exploring colors and new ways to introduce lightning because that seems to be your strong suit. Watch out for basics though. All in all just kiu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted May 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2014 Is that a .gif or has not sleeping for a few days started taking it's toll? Anyway, pretty dope tag. Overall the potential here is huge and that stands out, the color scheme could be brilliant if you did something similar on the left like the orange part, maybe like a cyan or something (because THAT combo totally hasn't been whored out since 08). Otherwise you've got a really nice lock on fundamentals, lightning is pretty good and you're honestly getting much better with depth than before. The flow is kinda funky because the way the tag is structured doesn't allow for it and the left side of the tag is kind of washed out. Generally though a really nice tag, keep exploring colors and new ways to introduce lightning because that seems to be your strong suit. Watch out for basics though. All in all just kiu Thank you! I was actually considering making it a .gif with the ashes moving around the ODST, but I thought it'd be too difficult for me. I was having a lot of difficulty with the flow, but everything else kinda put itself there - even though the render itself is just cut off on the side (you can barely notice now, thank god). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted May 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2014 Double posting is probably frowned upon, but I changed the coloring around in this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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