Dawn

[.Rai]

http://albtrss.deviantart.com/art/Dawn-448005520

[Astolfo]

Wow.

That's just.

Wow.

The clouds look really nice, and I like the sort of painted look of the mountains.

It looks great in monochrome.

[Aix]

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Clouds and stars look amazing.

 

Considering how much attention the big ass mountain draws, there's not enough detail and effort invested in it and it's really flat.

[.Rai]

Forgot that was a thing. Thought dA had some thing against it in the code, but sure.

I'll have to do more mountain practice. Hard as rocks. Literally. Require crazy amounts of detail when they're in the foreground. Kinda cheated a bit.

[Night]

Much sex right here bbcakes. 

 

Let me guess, Yuumei's cloud tut?

 

I'm honestly really impressed all in all. This is the kind of shit I wanted to see from you and you pretty much delivered.

There's only two things I look for in a piece these days.

• Does it showcase artist improvement.
• Does it inspire me to produce.

This hits both so as far as I'm concerned, I'd rather leave it at that rather than critique it. 

I'm sure Ali will give you ample advice regardless, I just want to stress how proud I am of my little raibread. ;_;

 

Keep it up. 

[.Rai]

<3

Yup, Yuumei's tut. There's plenty of improvement space here, but I'm considering that a plus. This was just to get me back in the groove. Yeah, I'm sure Ali will hit some cloud critique my way. Hopefully.