Samurai Spirit

[kevin7653]

Heyall! This is my first card in quite a while, I haven't been realy active since 2012 or something :/

 

ANYWAYS, this is for a contest, but ANY feedback would be great (as long as it's positive or Constructive Criricism ;)

 

 

LORE: If you control two or more "Six Samurai" monsters on your side of the field, you can Special Summon this card. Once per turn you may send one card from your hand to the graveyard to add one Bushido Counter to this card (max. 4). When this card is destroyed inflict 400 damage to your opponent for every Bushido Counter on this card.

 

Please excuse me if my OCG is off, as I said, I haven't been 'round for a few years. If there ARE any problems, please point them out though, so i can fix them.

 

Thanks for looking!

[Zauls]

OCG should be:

If you control two or more "Six Samurai" monsters: you can Special Summon this card (from your hand*). Once per turn: You can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; place 1 Bushido Counter on this card (max. 4). When destroyed: Inflict 400 damage to your opponent for every Bushido Counter that was on this card.

*I assume that's where you mean, but please specify.

 

The effect is almost entirely useless though and is basically just a worse Grandmaster. The only upside is that you can control more than 1. Six Samurai are a mass-Special Summoning (mostly from the hand) deck and it doesn't want a -1 very turn for a little bit of effect damage eventually.

[kevin7653]

Ah thanks! I'll fix the OCG, and perhaps tweak the effect a little so it works better. When I was making it I didn't want it to be too op, which is why it's strctured the way it is. Anyways, thanks again!