[YGO] Nightmare Soldier [Chapter 5: Research and Development] Posted!

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Thanks for liking Chapter 14 of Ice Queen, glad you liked it in some way :)

 

Just read Chapter 4 of this. Shorter comment than usual. Chapter was decent. Would have expected more of a burning desire in the face of 'I should have lost' from Ryujin, but I guess that's more for later chapters. Just his reaction after the duel seemed a bit, I dunno, didn't seem natural to me.

 

Ending was pretty good, Dylan's little appearance worked well, duel was all good (even if Honour by Rank was a silly anime-style custom card) but yeah, largely enjoyable.

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