Night Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Based on the superb writing of Thar. 99% scratched besides the textures and media credits / 53 Layers / 2.5 Hours. This was a ton of fun to make, critique if you feel like doing so, comments alone are welcome though. [spoiler= v2] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 I am in no position to artistically criticize in any way; but you got his f***ing catchphrase wrong. Not entirely sure about the next point but I'd have loved to see last names (Dramon, 74, Apostrophe, Soul) below the names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 I am in no position to artistically criticize in any way; but you got his f***ing catchphrase wrong. Not entirely sure about the next point but I'd have loved to see last names (Dramon, 74, Apostrophe, Soul) below the names. Couldn't find a way to fit in the "u", fite me irl. Looked odd so I scrapped the last names, albeit "Apostrophe" below my name would have been hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Would this be an animated movie, or a live-action one?Just curious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 The poster makes it seem more live-action type. Anyways, this is sexy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 I love you with what little love I have left for humanity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Do a red on white edit pl0x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 I am unsure if people like it based on your previous artworks or whether people like you or whether no one actually has the guts to critique. I find this lacking so much. Not bad with the texturing but it seems like you've done a hasty job. The smiley has some extremely clean outline, which shouldn't happen in this case because of all the splatter and texturing. The placement of the splatter could also use a lot of work but I know you haven't studied the concept of geometrical alignment so it is fine, YOU ARE FORGIVEN. Just make sure you play arround with the placement of the splatter at least 5 times before deciding on the best version. Always experiment, that's how you learn, through experimentation. And yeah, I would totally be interested in seeing an inverted one. White with red and instead of dark splatters much lighter ones (pink hues, etc) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 I am unsure if people like it based on your previous artworks or whether people like you or whether no one actually has the guts to critique. I find this lacking so much. Not bad with the texturing but it seems like you've done a hasty job. The smiley has some extremely clean outline, which shouldn't happen in this case because of all the splatter and texturing. The placement of the splatter could also use a lot of work but I know you haven't studied the concept of geometrical alignment so it is fine, YOU ARE FORGIVEN. Just make sure you play arround with the placement of the splatter at least 5 times before deciding on the best version. Always experiment, that's how you learn, through experimentation. And yeah, I would totally be interested in seeing an inverted one. White with red and instead of dark splatters much lighter ones (pink hues, etc) I AM FORGIVEN. The outline's clean due to having started with a basic smiley and then attempting to ravage it. I personally like the contrast it provides, albeit sharp. Splatter's pretty shit but that's what one would expect when working with about 3 variations of a single brush and then trying to pen-tool to alleviate the consistency. Normally I'd have GIMP and PS along with a plethora of brushes and textures, custom and downloaded, but seeing as though I'm on a new computer I had to make do with what I quickly gathered off of DN in the span of about 15 minutes. Agreed more or less though. Oh and get the fuck on Facebook, I need your assistance in designing the tattoo I'm getting done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Seriously red on white pl0x I don't even what the piece is, monitor is too shit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 27, 2014 Report Share Posted February 27, 2014 F*ck, how could I have missed this by a week? This is pretty dope. Not too fond of the plain, gradiented names at the top, but with the logos at the bottom, it's as if I was actually at the theatre looking at this on the wall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted March 2, 2014 Report Share Posted March 2, 2014 I have but one issue. it is awfully dark... The styles used complement well, and I love the bullet holes, if that's what they are. They seem excellently executed. However, I can't critique much more due to the dark colors. Hard for me to see anything else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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