X'isionKnight Posted February 19, 2014 Report Share Posted February 19, 2014 My name is Ryku Kenza and my life as a school student was normal and boring, I would go about my day to day life, sitting in classrooms and listening to things that i wasn't interested in. The town that I lived in is called 'Huntston Bay', a small island town off the coast of the mainland continent of 'Arcania'. I lived with my Mother 'Hirumi' and my grandmother, 'Akiko'. My father left when I was young and i was left to help my mother run a market stool after schools and on weekends. Every day i would see the other children playing and I wanted to join in, but I couldn't. At school I had two friends, 'Kazuki' and 'Tamiko', Kazuki was a close family friend, we grew up together and he had always been there for me. 'Tamiko' was in my class at school for a while but then she was bumped up a year. I didn't talk to anyone in class since 'Tamiko' left, I just spent every day looking out of the window wishing that something new and exciting would happen. And on that one fateful day, the sky broke and blue beams of light fell all over the continent. As I saw the light I jumped out of my seat and pushed my way through the classroom to the door. Waiting outside the door was 'Tamiko'. "Hey Ryku, did you see the lights" she exclaimed. "Yes" I replied "They just fell from the sky all of a sudden! Follow me!" I shouted as I ran down the school corridor. Tamiko yelled "HEY RYKU WAIT FOR ME!" as she chased me down the hallway. As we arrived at where i saw the light fall, there was a luminous blue card in the ground, I went to pick it up. "Hey Ryku, be careful! You don't know if that is dangerous or not!" said Tamiko in a concerned voice. "Don't sweat it Tamiko, I know what i'm doing." I replied I picked up the card and It illuminated blinding blue light. On the Card there was a picture of a Knight's castle and it read, 'Dimension Gate: Kingdom of Knights' That is when the world as I knew it truly changed for me. To be Contiued... Im going to be doing short chapters like this, so tell me what you think of it as feedback will help me take the plot in different directions, this is based on a card game that i have been developing and i hope to be able to post previews of the cards as soon as all the graphics for them is complete. I also hope to animate this story! I Hope you all Enjoy :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akron The Void Lord Posted February 19, 2014 Report Share Posted February 19, 2014 This.... ...seems rather decent. Although, i think that you haven't read the rules. Every chapter uploaded must be at least 2 pages long in Microsoft Word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X'isionKnight Posted February 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2014 Ahh did not see that :) I know what to do for the next chapter now so thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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