blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 so what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Touketsu Kage Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 OCG errors but i like the effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 thanks!!! what do you think ofthe second card??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 The first one has grammar errors and some OCG mistakes. "When this card is summoned, both you and your opponent can pick one card from eachothers hand and send it to the Graveyard." That`s better for grammar. I like the picture and the effect nevertheless. 8/10 And what do you mean by second card, I only see one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 oh im talking about King Of The Golden Eternal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Oh sorry i have to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 I know this is your thread, but don't doublepost. And I like your other card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 The first one has grammar errors and some OCG mistakes. "When this card is summoned' date=' both you and your opponent can pick one card from eachothers hand and send it to the Graveyard." That`s better for grammar. I like the picture and the effect nevertheless. 8/10 And what do you mean by second card, I only see one.[/quote'] first off it would be discard sence sending is overpowerd and what is being summoned? a spell card it should be activated heck activate shouldnt even be in the text edit: "Both you and your opponent pick one card at random from each others hand and discard it." thats better but not perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 You and your opponent randomly select 1 card from each others Hands and discard them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blader1010 Posted March 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 bump**** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Dude theres no cards there now, so I take it your remaking your card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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