Simping For Hina Posted February 2, 2014 Report Share Posted February 2, 2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted February 2, 2014 Report Share Posted February 2, 2014 I don't quite know what I'm looking at but it arouses me and that's unsettling. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted February 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2014 I don't quite know what I'm looking at but it arouses me and that's unsettling. <3 It wasn't my goal to arouse you, but that is always a plus. I must be doing something right. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted February 3, 2014 Report Share Posted February 3, 2014 Lighting seems forced as does the text. Flow's good, that's all it's really got going for it I suppose. Iffy on how to make this better because it's not really got much going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted February 3, 2014 Report Share Posted February 3, 2014 There's not enough really going on. Also, i'd like to see more colors incorporated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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