The End square tag thingyyyyyyyyyyy

[Tormented]

I dunno, I needed to post something, this was like 90ish layers due to me individually going through to each light source and working on it.

 

 

I dunno a little cluster fuck.

[Night]

Texture clips at various parts, I'd say it needs cleaning, but the texture doesn't really fit with the piece regardless.

Your initial concept with the render was to play with the neon lighting emitted off of the focal, you should have played to that much much more. 

For example, do what you did with the render onto a c4d's that have that same neon glow and then capitalize one that. 

 

As it stands, nothing compliments each other. 

Redo it.