Night Posted May 10, 2014 Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 If you don't mind settling for mediocrity I'll keep doing it, the problem mainly being that you constantly send me shit at the worst possible time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 Yeah, pretty sure if he did it for anything, it was to shut me up. If you don't mind settling for mediocrity I'll keep doing it, the problem mainly being that you constantly send me s*** at the worst possible time. It's cause I always finish it at the worst possible time. Also, I DID say you didn't have to do it right away, didn't I? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 10, 2014 Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 That was certainly an interesting read. The situation certainly escalated rather quickly after Yin's murder. I wonder if there is anything that creepy miracle worker Armz can't do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 Yeah, Armz's character has gotta be my favorite as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 Has it finally happened? Did this thread finally die? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 I don't think the thread has died yet. There have been periods where the thread hadn't received a reply for a couple of days. I'm sure activity will pick up when the next pairing is posted or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 I guess I should post. I'm just not a huge fan of this duo of chapters because of Crab and Pika. The writing was fine and the ending to the second chapter was great, but... I just don't like Crab and Pika, or their personalities, so I wasn't as interested in this one. >>'' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 I don't think the thread has died yet. There have been periods where the thread hadn't received a reply for a couple of days. I'm sure activity will pick up when the next pairing is posted or something I would've at LEAST thought Rodrigo would comment, since he was pretty hype for it along with a few other people. I guess I should post. I'm just not a huge fan of this duo of chapters because of Crab and Pika. The writing was fine and the ending to the second chapter was great, but... I just don't like Crab and Pika, or their personalities, so I wasn't as interested in this one. >>'' Yeah, I figured it had something to do with the characters, but they both ended up [acronym="dead"]like they did[/acronym], didn't they? That's good, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 I would've at LEAST thought Rodrigo would comment, since he was pretty hype for it along with a few other people. Speaking of (at the time this post was written)... Rodrigo is/was viewing the thread, so I'm sure he'll comment fairly soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 Speaking of (at the time this post was written)... Rodrigo is/was viewing the thread, so I'm sure he'll comment fairly soon. Dat timing. Also waiting for Ain to comment, thought I think at this point I'm just calling out people's names who expressed interest in it during all the teaser announcements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodrigo Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 I gotta say, the ending was the absolutely best shit I've ever read. Great job on this one. Broken did very well on proof-reading, and the drama on the Ambulance shooting part was top-notch. I'm just happy Crab got to die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 I'm just happy Crab got to die Thing is, while Crab dying was a given, the original plan was to have Pika survive the blast enough to regain consciousness and escape into hiding, where Ene and Miku kidnap her for their senpai, Desu, to be her "master." But... I didn't feel like going through all that. I just wanted to end it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 Thing is, while Crab dying was a given, the original plan was to have Pika survive the blast enough to regain consciousness and escape into hiding, where Ene and Miku kidnap her for their senpai, Desu, to be her "master." But... I didn't feel like going through all that. I just wanted to end it. Watch Desu kill you for preventing him from having Pika. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 But it's the thought that counts, right? ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodrigo Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Thing is, while Crab dying was a given, the original plan was to have Pika survive the blast enough to regain consciousness and escape into hiding, where Ene and Miku kidnap her for their senpai, Desu, to be her "master." But... I didn't feel like going through all that. I just wanted to end it. I DEMAND YOU TO WRITE THIS PART AS AN "OVA" THIS IS TOO GOOD TO PASS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 I DEMAND YOU TO WRITE THIS PART AS AN "OVA" THIS IS TOO GOOD TO PASS Every chapter is an OVA, though, so it'd really just be Pika x Desu. Though I might have said too much already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodrigo Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Every chapter is an OVA, though, so it'd really just be Pika x Desu. Though I might have said too much already. Getting me excited like this... You're gonna pay. And by that I mean you'll be getting it done. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Interesting read, as always. Though for some reason I think neither Crab nor Pika actually died, but eh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 I guess I should post. I'm just not a huge fan of this duo of chapters because of Crab and Pika. The writing was fine and the ending to the second chapter was great, but... I just don't like Crab and Pika, or their personalities, so I wasn't as interested in this one. >>'' I sort of have the problem where the two people I actually find to be incredibly funny and at least somewhat interesting in their own right never really got to display much wit in either parts. I feel like you at least tried a bit harder with Pika this time around. Her desperation was pretty well done. Mugen and Coolspy's dynamic was pretty amazing though. The plot line is pretty good although I'm not sure why YCMaker is in an ambulance despite days having passed since they found him. I guess he was being moved between hospitals? Hell, maybe I missed something. I do that sometimes. Thing is, while Crab dying was a given, the original plan was to have Pika survive the blast enough to regain consciousness and escape into hiding, where Ene and Miku kidnap her for their senpai, Desu, to be her "master." But... I didn't feel like going through all that. I just wanted to end it. That sounds absolutely amazing. Well if that's blown I guess you can try a double date ship. DesuxNags (Ene) and AgroxEclair (Miku). DesuxRaine is also always a super strong ship. But it's the thought that counts, right? ;_; Yes. Striker's just an ignorant person who thinks of me to be far more vain than I actually am. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 I actually really loved the Monkey and Coolspy part of the fic. It was easily my favorite scene in it and just really well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 I sort of have the problem where the two people I actually find to be incredibly funny and at least somewhat interesting in their own right never really got to display much wit in either parts. But that's what makes them funny. I feel like you at least tried a bit harder with Pika this time around. Her desperation was pretty well done. I knew I had to make up for her character degradation in the first part. Glad I pulled it off. The plot line is pretty good although I'm not sure why YCMaker is in an ambulance despite days having passed since they found him. I guess he was being moved between hospitals? Hell, maybe I missed something. I do that sometimes. Yeah, we'll just go with that. I was totally oblivious to the time jump as I was trying to finish it. I thought it was taking place right after Crab got arrested. That sounds absolutely amazing. So be it. It'll be next, despite all the other pairings I've been planning to do for a while now. AgroxEclair (Miku). At this point, anything involving Agro sounds boring. Yes. Striker's just an ignorant person who thinks of me to be far more vain than I actually am. I feel violated knowing I used to think the same way of you. I actually really loved the Monkey and Coolspy part of the fic. It was easily my favorite scene in it and just really well done. It was mine too. Those two probably have the most chemistry in all my pairings, so it was very fun to write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G.B. Sparticus Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Yay! i'm single! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted May 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Yay! i'm single! Yes you are. You're also spamming the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Thing is, while Crab dying was a given, the original plan was to have Pika survive the blast enough to regain consciousness and escape into hiding, where Ene and Miku kidnap her for their senpai, Desu, to be her "master." But... I didn't feel like going through all that. I just wanted to end it. That sounds like an amazing plot. I'm fine with that being written over the other pairings you had planned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted May 13, 2014 Report Share Posted May 13, 2014 At this point, anything involving Agro sounds boring. I wonder why~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.