Guest JoshIcy Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Here is all the cards made of my account name lol, enjoy... all credit goes to the cards respective creators... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Wow u did it all on your selfcreative!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Wow u did it all on your selfcreative!!!!!!! no sadly, check under the card who made it... this is just all the cards that have been made of my account name lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72night Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 *whistles* That's quite a number of members cards. And the images are great. ^-^ I can't give you a rating though, XD. Since you only made two of the cards. ^-^ Nice cards. ^-^ Or, collection. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 then just rate the 2 i did make.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72night Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 ^ Alrighty. Since I'm really really really really bored, I'll do a full scale review/correction. (Lol, a correction from a Level 3 member, that sounds funny, XD) Since the cards are member cards, I won't rate on balance.>_> Then again I'm horrible with balance. >_> Card #1: Aside from the fact that I don't really know the official OCG for your Spell Speeds, I still see lots of visible OCG errors. "... The Monster Special Summoned by the effect of this card changes its Original ATK and DEF to 2000..." I don't think Monster is supposed to be capitalized in that sense, only if it's the beginning of the sentence or if you using it as Monster Card, which I don't think your saying in this effect. Also, the sentence is partially off if you think about it. Even though I never really paid attention to my cards very well, I never read "...changes its Original ATK and DEF to XXXX..." before. However, that's only me, as I've said, I'm not that attentive, XD. Onto the next sentence, "...In addition, add the following effect to the selected monster card's text. "When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 1 "Icyblue the Fated Soul" Tokens (Warrior/EARTH/Level 5/ATK 2000/DEF 2000". Well, I don't ever remember reading 'in addition' on a card before, but it sounds like something it would be on TCG so I'm going to ignore that one, lol. Now onto the effect, I think it'll be more simpler to just say, "The monster Special Summoned by this card's effect gains the following effect:...". Also, onto the extra monster effect, "When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 1 "Icyblue the Fated Soul" Tokens (Warrior/EARTH/Level 5/ATK 2000/DEF 2000..." Well, I kinda have a liking to removing monsters, so I might know a thing or two here... And when you say "When this card is removed from the field, don't you mean from play? Because, removing from the field is a equivalent meaning to sending it to the Graveyard. Less your trying to say, "When this card is removed from play from the field". ...Now comes the tokens >_<. Ok, this one will be a lot simpler! (Beast-Type/LIGHT/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 1000) <_< That's the OCG of Ojama Trio. As you can see, you forgot the '-Type' after 'Warrior', and your token would be called "Icyblue the Fated Soul Tokens", Tokens is part of the tokens name. >_< Hope you can rewrite the effect or something, because I don't want to read all that to type it, lol. >_< Card #2: Well, honestly, I don't really see any visible or noticeable OCG/grammar errors. ^-^ But last I checked, it's "...This card can be Normal Summoned without a Tribute...", lol. Oh, even though I never use, or try to not to use effects that allows you to dismiss their effects, there is a error. When you say, "...all face-up Machine-Type monsters are unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards..." your implying that they aren't affected by Spell and Traps, that's it. The correct and more specific statement, I believe, would be "...all face-up Machine-Type monster are unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards..." Again, I'm not to sure about 'in addition', but since you seem to use it a lot, I'll guess it's a OCG. {Side note, that's a hard damage, you or your opponent loses Life Points if a Machine-Type monster destroyed? Maybe make it only if the monster was destroyed by a result of battle, but it's your card. ^-^} Here is the verdict, "Icyblue the Fated Soul":Name: 9/10, it sounds really kul. ^-^OCG/Grammar/Spelling: 6.7, it's not the best or the worst... Picture: 8.9/10, I love it, it looks super kul.Originality: 10/10, it's original, I suppose...Effect: 9.4/10, if I knew more about Spell Speeds and Chains, you'd get perfect on this, but since I don't... oh, and the effect is very interesting and unique. ^-^ "Icyblue - Master of Machines":Name: 8.7/10, sounds kul, but meh at the same time.OCG/Grammar/Spelling: 8.3/10, it's surly better than the other one.Picture: 8.4/10, The Picture definitely suites the name, but kinda plain for me. =/Originality: 10/10, it's original and twisted. ^-^ Effect: 10/10, L-O-V-E it, the effect is so twisted. Since apparently, I've created effects with super high prices I developed a high likings to twisted effects with high prices. XD Totals:"Icyblue the Fated Soul": 74.6%Icyblue - Master of Machines":90.8%Total for both:82.7% a... BB Ha! I bet when I posted my first comment, you thought I only commented for the post count! Ha! Instead of a rate, I gave you a correction list! =P >_< Too much typing, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 ^.^ thanks, that was indepth lol but like you said, more on the correction side >.>and i got near perfects where it mattered most to me!! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Egnio Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 I say you're full of ego, icy. Full, blown ego. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 nah, i just figured id chronicle all my member cards here instead of hunting them all down XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Egnio Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 ... Ah... k... But I insist. Too many cards of yourself... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 ... Ah... k... But I insist. Too many cards of yourself... 1 was created of a whim, the other for a "post a card of yourself" thread. the others were just simple requests in those sort of threads. and the last 2 by jspamax was kinda entrapment, he had to make the extra 2 cards to complete the combo >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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