[TORMEY + CATMAN] DOGE

[Tormented]

 

[spoiler='lel'] Night is trying to get me back into Showcase so figured I'd post my current piece (not completed) but looking for opinions etc

 

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[Catman25]

 

what is this Night name change business

 

 

 

Imo, really sharp, almost looking pixelly. Light source coming from the back of the head seems un-addressed as well. Digging the orange though.

[Night]

Have you still got the full piece lying around by the way? 

[Madsen]

I like it. Very pleasant to look at; a few issues here and there but it's a nice tag.

 

Erasing the back part of the right hand with a round soft brush especially wasn't the best of ideas, it becomes really distracting when noticed.

There's 2 light sources to have on here - the front which you've sorted and the back (his head and that general area) which isn't quite sorted. Needs some white light there.

A good deal of manip'ing the background could've been done I think, it's got potential with what I see to be some kind of opened garage with a view to the mountains. Some more small additions could make it a lot more interesting to look at if there were details. It's very easy to appreciate great detail in work.

Although this is based on having low contrast and saturation a bit more of both wouldn't hurt, a good crop and darkening the non focal parts would shift view to the actual focal.

It's very much your run of the mill tag because you can't extrapolate a clear concept and idea from it, but you can rarely expect this kind of things even from much higher class designers simply because complicated ideas are hard to execute. This has a lot of potential in my opinion, with some more wow factor it could be an even more impressive piece.