Scary Face Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 after following this board for a while, it's my turn to show a card i made! [spoiler='its lore'] You can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard). This card cannot attack during the turn it is Special Summoned this way. If this card is attacked, it loses 1000 ATK and DEF during the Damage Step only. This card cannot be tributed or used as an Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard; you take 1000 damage. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a Synchro Material Monster; send all cards in your hand to the Graveyard. [/spoiler] well i played YGO for a while, so hope i didnt make too broken card, all CnC are welcome :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 woa not bad for a first card :) but what it can do? it has only 1 effect which can be either powerful or useless depending on the deck u use, it cannot attack the turn u ss it, sou can't just burial it and use it OTK along with Dragon Rulers, also cant be used as Xyz Material mean Hieratic or any rank 8 focus-deck can't use this dragon too, so i can said that it's well balanced but IMO, it cant do anything, u should add some effect or something that make its ss more interesting, nice card overall :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 Hmm, nice catch with the no ATK and the no Xyz summoning clause. But still, you can Synchro summon using this card easily with generic level 10 and 11 synchro existing, and discard 1 card is quite a light cost for summoning a 3K meatshield out of nowhere, so I suggest to add some more restrictions or costs to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 thx for both comment ^ ^ @Someone i plan to use this in my fanfic and its effect are greater than this w/o non-attacking or non-tribute however in this RC i see that if i put that effect here it must be OP so i balance it a bit, hope u understand :) @Renko so, i adjust it a bit, now each time it's go to Grave you take some damage, also to Synchro with it u have to take some risk, hope it balanced now :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted December 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2013 bump, I want some comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BatMed Posted December 2, 2013 Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 Artwork: I just love the way you choose this card's Artwork,, It's Brilliant 10/10 :D Effects: They're Balanced: You can easily special summon it (by using cards like "Foolish Burial") but as a cost you cannot use it for a tribute or xyz summon. It also can support the "Fabled" and "Darkworld" deck, since all its effects depending on discarding cards 9/10 :) ATK/DEF: Cool. But I Prefer that you decrease this card's ATK to 2800, maybe?? 8/10 :) Result: EPIC CARD, 9/10 :wub: Also, for your first card, your OCG is great :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted December 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 yea, i think i not have a problem with OCG so much since i play ygo for a while, and about its effects, both effects are not trigger DW or fabled since they need discarding but these effects are about to send cards from hand to the Graveyard, and 3000 ATK is because im making this card to be in the same role as Blue-Eyes, Red Demon or Galaxy-Eyes (yea the user of this card must be some prideful character too lol) anyway thx for the comment :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 3, 2013 Report Share Posted December 3, 2013 It's discard effect is quite cheap. Other than that this card looks pretty good as a 3000 ATK meat-wall. It can't attack when Summoned, and punishes you or downright prevents you from doing it if you wanna use it for a Synchro, Xyz, Ritual, Tribute Summon, or even it's own discard. Skill Drain would make it able to attack, but wouldn't get rid any other effects. Axe of Fools is also an easy 4000 ATK monster (but so is Beast King Barbaros so, anyways). The only thing I'd say it that it shouldn't be able to attack at all. Being a cheap 3000 ATK card. I feel bad saying this and looking at Blue-Eyes's current cheapness......... *sigh* stupid game nowadays. It'd be cool that Axe of Fools, Rainbow Veil, and Skill Draing actually kinda broke your seal, and stuff.... but I guess there's nothing particularly broken about this at all. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
berserk baboon Posted December 4, 2013 Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 It's broken. 1 discard is not a fair cost for such a powerful monster, even with all those limitations. This thing would be a nightmare in Lightsworn and Dark World. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted December 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 It's discard effect is quite cheap. Other than that this card looks pretty good as a 3000 ATK meat-wall. It can't attack when Summoned, and punishes you or downright prevents you from doing it if you wanna use it for a Synchro, Xyz, Ritual, Tribute Summon, or even it's own discard. Skill Drain would make it able to attack, but wouldn't get rid any other effects. Axe of Fools is also an easy 4000 ATK monster (but so is Beast King Barbaros so, anyways). The only thing I'd say it that it shouldn't be able to attack at all. Being a cheap 3000 ATK card. I feel bad saying this and looking at Blue-Eyes's current cheapness......... *sigh* stupid game nowadays. It'd be cool that Axe of Fools, Rainbow Veil, and Skill Draing actually kinda broke your seal, and stuff.... but I guess there's nothing particularly broken about this at all. Nice work. thx for a reviewing :lol: It's broken. 1 discard is not a fair cost for such a powerful monster, even with all those limitations. This thing would be a nightmare in Lightsworn and Dark World. you still dont get how different of discarding and sending, anyway thx for a comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted December 4, 2013 Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 It's broken. 1 discard is not a fair cost for such a powerful monster, even with all those limitations. This thing would be a nightmare in Lightsworn and Dark WorldA. At least not as broken as the Dragon Rulers + Babies. And actually all the drawbacks from this card counters the monster's beatstick and easy summoning. Though a few more drawbacks would make it more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted December 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 hmm according to every comments, i think i should do sth, w8 a min here i go, now it's not a 3000 meatshield anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted December 4, 2013 Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 hmm according to every comments, i think i should do sth, w8 a min Maybe discard 2 cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
berserk baboon Posted December 4, 2013 Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 At least not as broken as the Dragon Rulers + Babies. And actually all the drawbacks from this card counters the monster's beatstick and easy summoning. Though a few more drawbacks would make it more balanced. I don't disagree, but Dragon Rulers are the epitome of bad card design, so I don't see your point. It doesn't need all these limitations or drawbacks, it just needs a fairer cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted December 4, 2013 Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 hmm from all the comments, i think this card looks better than the day i commented it when u just posted it, now also cant easily use for sync if u want to keep resources or have a damage when sent to grave, but from the last change u made also make this card no longer a 3000-wall anymore, i think when compare to a tyranny dragons such as DRs, this card is very well-balanced now, and to the above comment, i didnt think DRs are bad design, the only bad are babies, DRs are now most deck tools which can do various thing up to the deck, dragunity, mermail, FF, machina, etc.and i think they're great cards in YGO :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted December 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 hmm from all the comments, i think this card looks better than the day i commented it when u just posted it, now also cant easily use for sync if u want to keep resources or have a damage when sent to grave, but from the last change u made also make this card no longer a 3000-wall anymore, i think when compare to a tyranny dragons such as DRs, this card is very well-balanced now, and to the above comment, i didnt think DRs are bad design, the only bad are babies, DRs are now most deck tools which can do various thing up to the deck, dragunity, mermail, FF, machina, etc.and i think they're great cards in YGO :) thx for keep following :), and yea i agree that Dragon Rulers are not that much, but i also think that Konami will do something next banlist, maybe limit them because of their speed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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