Hikari-chan Posted November 27, 2013 Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 Hello everyone this is my first archetype :D this is the "Moon" archetype, their concept is to gain benefit when flip a monster face-down i think i cant update this anymore ..., well thx everyone for followed :) [spoiler='Priestess of the Moon'] Lore: Once per turn, during either player's turn, if this card is the only monster you control: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field and pay 800 Life Points; change that target into face-down Defense Position. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Moonlight Archer'] Lore: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. If a monster(s) on the field was flipped face-down by a card effect: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand), then destroy 1 face-down card on the field. Once per turn, during either player's turn, If you control a face-up "Moon" monster other than this card: You can pay 600 Life Points and target 1 monster on the field; change the target to face-down Defense Position. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Tsukiari, Dragon of the Moonlight'] Lore: 2 Level 4 "Moon" monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned; gain 400 Life Points for each face-down card on the field. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 monster on the field; change the target to face-down Defense Position. P.S. Tsukiari's name is from Tsuki (Moon) + Akari (Light) ^ ^ [/spoiler] [spoiler='Cold Moon'] Lore: Target 1 face-up monster on the field; change it to face-up Defense Position, and if you do, its effects are negated until the End Phase. If you control a face-up "Moon" monster: You can change the target to face-down Defense Position instead. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Enchanter of the Cold Moon'] Lore: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If a monster(s) on the field was flipped face-down by a card effect: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand), then you can flip all face-down Defense Position monster on the field face-up, flip effects are not activated at this time. For each monsters flipped by this effect, gain 300 Life Points. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Rotsuki, Dragon of the Frozen Moon'] Lore: 1 "Moon" Tuner + 1 or more "Moon" non-Tuner monsters Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. While this card is face-up on the field; negate all Defense Position monsters effects, except for "Moon" monsters. Once per turn, during your opponent's turn, when your opponent activate a Spell or Trap Card: You can send 1 face-up Defense Position monster on the field to the Graveyard; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy it. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Contract with Artemis'] Lore: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Tsukiko, Envoy of the Moonlight". You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels are 8 or more. When a face-up "Tsukiko, Envoy of the Moonlight" you control would be destroyed: You can banish this card in your Graveyard along with that card; Special Summon 1 "Artemis, Goddess of the Moon" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. If you do: You can pay half your Life Points; Special Summon as many monsters from your opponent's Graveyard as possible to your opponent's side of the field. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Tsukiko, Envoy of the Moonlight'] Lore: You can Ritual Summon this card with "Contract with Artemis". If the only cards your opponent controls are Defense Position monsters, this card can attack your opponent directly. This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. If this card attacks while in Defense Position, apply the ATK of this card for damage calculation. Once per turn, during either player's turn, if this card is the only monster you control: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; change that target into face-down Defense Position. Image by -Someone-, thx u very much for making this for me :D [/spoiler] [spoiler='Artemis, Goddess of the Moon'] Lore: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by "Contract with Artemis" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card cannot be Tributed. This card is unaffected by Trap effects. All face-down monsters on the field cannot flipped face-up. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; change it to face-down Defense Position. During your Standby Phase: You can gain 400 Life Points for each face-down monster on the field, then inflict equal damage to your opponent, and if you do, this card cannot attack this turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Rune of the Moon'] Lore: Once per turn, when a monster(s) is Special Summoned: You can change the Special Summoned monster(s) to face-down Defense Position. Destroy this card during your 3rd End Phase after activation. [/spoiler] all comments/suggestions/opinions/criticisms are welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 27, 2013 Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 u finally did it :) yea it should be like this, then u can still updating cards later, also i suggest that u should have some spoilers when u have around 5 or more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 thx for all recommends i got today ^ ^ and yea i will remember that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 added a first Spell card! well it's a second book of moon if u control a "moon" monster :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 just added 2 cards :) also bump ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 28, 2013 Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 the Tuner and Synchro is interesting, a thread like Marshmallon or sth like that are useless against that card, nice work ^ ^ (also remember, u have 6 cards now, you should make a spoiler) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 just added 3 cards ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 nice cards, this set seem to based-on that Priestess, then u add a card to start a combo and finally ss the boss monster (both sync and xyz gain benefit from the effect of the effect monster before them so much). some images are awesome, especially Tsukiko > <, also her effects are interesting, i always like total defense shogun's effect but didnt expect the direct-attackable like this, nice idea though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 thx u very much :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 No Sailor Moon based card? Awww.... Anyway, I like the idea of this set. It seems fairly balanced. This + Ghostrick = YOUR DEAD! So yea, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 well i dont want my first archetype to be in Pop Culture lol, and yea if play with Ghostrick , not only the set effect are useful for them but u can also play chaos monster such as BLS since this archetype are based on LIGHT monster (the only attribute i love to make :)) anyway thx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Well I was thinking like a Moon Princess card that's kinda based on Sailor Moon but meh, it doesn't really matter. (If its only based on it, it's not a Pop Culture Deck =P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 maybe if i have no idea to continue, i will try that XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digijosh Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Good/cool ideas. I would say with Archer you should add "you may destroy" otherwise you could end up destroying one of your own cards when it is summoned (unless that's how you wanted it). And with Artemis you could say "then inflict equal damage to your opponent" instead of "inflict damage to your opponent by the same amount", just me, but I think it sounds better. I like seeing good created archetypes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 yea i intentionally want archer to destroy a card for her summon and thx for Artemis's OCG ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted December 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2013 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted December 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 Continuous Trap Card Rune of the Moon added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted December 3, 2013 Report Share Posted December 3, 2013 the trap u just added looks broken, it's make all when Special Summoned effect useless so easily, and if u pass the 2nd EP, it has a OPT protection that i think too OP for a card that completely shut many cards up like this, not to mention that ur ace, Artemis, is unaffected by that card, you should do sth about that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted December 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2013 u think so? well i should have OPT for a set effect or sth like that, thx for following my updates :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted December 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2013 bump, also just balanced rune of the moon :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted December 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2013 looks like i have no idea to continue, well i think 10 are enough, CnC still welcome :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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