New Djinn Xyz monster

[Rainbeux]

I was bored so I made a support for the Djinn Xyz monsters. Please give feed back.

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Effect: 2 Level 4 monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card using 1 Rank 3 "Djinn" Xyz monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material attached to this card and target 1 Rank 3 "Djinn" Xyz monster you control. Until your End Phase, that monsters effect is negated and it can attack your opponent directly.

 

V1 Effect:2 Level 4 monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card using 1 Rank 3 "Djinn" Xyz monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material attached to this card and target 1 Rank 3 "Djinn" Xyz monster you control. Until your End Phase, that monsters effect is negated and it can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, you can detach 2 Xyz materials Special Summon 1 Rank 3 "Djinn" Xyz monster from your Extra Deck. Its effect is negated and cannot attack unless you discard 1 card.

[StarKnightJacobs]

The effect is good, in fact quite handy for finishing opponents. It's a solid card. I however really don't like the artwork choice. It doesn't fit in at all with the other Djinns in my opinion.

[licorso]

The effect is great. but maybe add a second effect where you can special summon a rank 3 or lower djin from the graveyard too so you can bring out the djin needed to fimish off your opponent

[Rainbeux]

Posted new Version. Can not find art substitute.