Colosseum Set, Plz rate

[Wolfguy26]

Colosseum Berserker

Warrior/Effect/LIGHT/4 Stars

If three Rage! Equip cards are equipped to this card, this cards original attack becomes 4000.

ATK/1600 DEF/1400

 

 

Colosseum Warrior

Warrior/Effect/EARTH/4 Stars

This card can attack twice in the same battle phase.

ATK/1400 DEF/1400

 

Colosseum Assassin

Warrior/Effect/EARTH/4 Stars

This card cannot be selected as an attack target. Discard one level 7 monster card from your hand to destroy one monster on your opponent field.

ATK/1800 DEF/1800

 

Colosseum Guard

Warrior/Effect/EARTH/4 Stars

Discard this card from hand to make any damage you take this turn 0.

ATK/1200 DEF/1000

 

Colosseum Beast

Beast/Effect/EARTH/6 Stars

If this card battles a warrior card, destroy the monster without inflicting battle damage.

ATK/ 2250 DEF/2000)

 

Colosseum Medic

Warrior/Effect/LIGHT/7 Stars

Once per turn, discard one spell or trap card from your hand to summon one "Colosseum" Monster from your graveyard.

ATK/2300 DEF/2700

 

Colosseum Champion

Warrior/Effect/EARTH/9 Stars

This card can only be summoned by tributing 3 "Colosseum" Monsters. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. (ATK 3500/DEF 2500)

 

Spells:

 

Colosseum

Field

Increase the ATK and DEF of all face-up "Colosseum" by 500.

 

Tribal Charm

Continuous

After ten End Phase after this card was activated; the owner on this card wins the duel.

 

Rage!

Equip

This card can only be equipped to a "Colosseum" monster. Pay any amount of Life Points and increase the equipped monsters ATK and DEF by the amount of Life Points paid.

 

Traps:

 

Foul

Normal

When an opponent’s monster attacks, negate the attack. The monster that was attacked can halve his ATK to attack your opponent directly.

 

Hail Mary

Normal

Activate during your opponents draw phase, guess the card drawn. If right, destroy all cards on your opponent’s field and your opponent must ends his turn after all cards have been removed from the field.

[Wolfguy26]

I worked hard on these and no ones gonna rate them?

[MasterOfMagicians]

The structure you have them in makes it hard to read/judge.

Cards look good.

Like the idea.

Grammatical and structure errors.

3.5/5

[Wolfguy26]

Spelling and Grammer fixed. Thanks gos to microsoft word and spell check. And thx magician. Can any body show me the proper structure so when i make new cards for this set, I can get better ratings?

[Aesirson]

Maybe like this:

 

Name of a monster

Spellcaster/Effect/LIGHT/4 Stars

Bla bla bla

ATK/1000 DEF/1000

[MasterOfMagicians]

I always set up my format like this:

Monsters -

 

Name:

Attribute:

Level:

Type:

Effect: (If there is one)

ATK:

DEF:

 

Spell/Trap

 

Name:

Type:

Effect:

[Cyber Altair]

nice. i haven't seen a Colosseum set before. make them into real cards.

[Wolfguy26]

I need some pics though

[Wolfguy26]

Updated Format

[Lucas Maximus]

Meh, there not bad, they are a little basic though. >_>

6/10