Warrior Xyz and CXyz

[ForzaForSwe]

Update: Fixed OCG on CXyz card, Added "SXyz Ivanthol, Ascended Crusader of Nascgaga Skies". SXyz stands for "Shining Xyz" so you need a rank-up card like "Rank-Up-Magic Astral Force" cause it needs "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" to activate his other effect. Enjoy!

[spoiler=Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga]

Lore:

2 Level 5 Synchro monsters

Once per turn, during either player's turn, when an opponent's Spell/Trap Card is activated; you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate the effect. If you do: Destroy it. If this card battles a non-LIGHT monster: Negate it's effects activated on the field or in the Graveyard until the End Phase.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=CXyz Ivanthol, Death Knight of Naschaga Ruins]

Lore:

3 Level 6 Synchro monsters

Once per turn, this card cannot be target or destoryed by your opponent's Spell/Trap Card. If this card has "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect.

● You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; until your End Phase: Negate all non-DARK monster effects activated on the field or in the Graveyard. During the End Phase, inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each monster that had its effect(s) negated during the turn in which this effect was activated.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=SXyz Ivanthol, Ascended Crusader of Naschaga Skies]

Lore:

3 Level 7 Synchro monsters

Thrice per Duel, this card cannot be target or destoryed by your opponent's cards or effects. If this card has "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect.

● Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate all non-LIGHT monster effects activated on the field or in the Graveyard. If you do: Destroy all face-up non-LIGHT Effect monsters your opponent controls (Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to this effect's activation.) If you do: You cannot conduct your Battle Phase. If this card on the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: You can Special Summon "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" from your Graveyard.[/spoiler]

 

CnC is always welcomed. And please if you see something wrong with the OCG, notify me so i can improve :D

[goddamnit names are a pain]

On the normal:

Great art, awesome card, good summoning conditions (for me). Grammar tips: it's should be its, and its effects should be negated during the battle phase entirely. I think this would stop already active effects, like attack boosts, and it would still stop them from activating anywhere.

 

On the CXyz: 

Once again, I love the art and effect, and the summoning conditions. Grammar tips: During the End Phase, inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each monster that had its effect(s) negated during the turn in which this effect was activated. (Compared to what you had) I also think the effects of monsters should be negated period, once again stopping lingering effects.

I would modify the damage dealt to 400, since 100 is a little weak for such a hard-to-summon monster.

 

Nice cards, keep up the creative work! This shows that Synchros and Xyz can co-exist! XD

[ForzaForSwe]

On the normal:

Great art, awesome card, good summoning conditions (for me). Grammar tips: it's should be its, and its effects should be negated during the battle phase entirely. I think this would stop already active effects, like attack boosts, and it would still stop them from activating anywhere.

 

On the CXyz: 

Once again, I love the art and effect, and the summoning conditions. Grammar tips: During the End Phase, inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each monster that had its effect(s) negated during the turn in which this effect was activated. (Compared to what you had) I also think the effects of monsters should be negated period, once again stopping lingering effects.

I would modify the damage dealt to 400, since 100 is a little weak for such a hard-to-summon monster.

 

Nice cards, keep up the creative work! This shows that Synchros and Xyz can co-exist! XD

Thank you man for those kind words :D And i agree witjh you on most of the problems. I don't agree with you on the negation effect that are on both cards.

I mean, if i rewrite them to have it like you want it. It would be OP (CXyz are all OP, but i was think of the normal Xyz) and CXyz negation effect negates for a whole turn. Most Effect Monsters don't have an effect that activates for example whenever you want in the Graveyard,like "Necro Gardna". I thought of the "Mermail" archtype when making these negation effects. Cause "Abysslinde" is a real pain in the ass.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

I thought of the "Mermail" archtype when making these negation effects. Cause "Abysslinde" is a real pain in the ass.

I hear you man. I only dislike fighting 3 decks right now, and that is number 1. XD

But hey, make your cards how you want to; they're your cards. I think they are pretty good as is. I wanted to point out though that being OP is a little ok considering I use two level 5 Synchros to Summon T.G. Blade Blaster. Basically, instead of a Level 10, you get a Rank 5 with power to match.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Ok, here we go:

 

Up to three times per Duel, this card cannot be targeted or destroyed (this word is misspelled) by your opponent's cards or effects. If this card has "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect.

● Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate all non-LIGHT monster effects activated on the field or in the Graveyard. If you do: Destroy all face-up non-LIGHT Effect monsters your opponent controls (Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to this effect's activation.) If you do: You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn in which this effect was activated. If this card on the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: You can Special Summon "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" from your Graveyard.

 

Ok, I had a couple questions. Do you summon this card with Rank Up Magic Astral's force, or some way not included yet? He is a Rank 7, as the first form is a 5. Maybe you meant to Rank-Up the second form? 

I like this card's art, but I think it may already be used somewhere on YCM, sometime recently. Still is befitting and works quite well. I like how this card is immune to card effects and destruction, but the attack seems a little high when that is considered. That could just be me, since this guy is a boss, and is challenging to summon. 

Nice work incorporating the SXyz!

[ForzaForSwe]

Ok, here we go:

 

Up to three times per Duel, this card cannot be targeted or destroyed (this word is misspelled) by your opponent's cards or effects. If this card has "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect.

● Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate all non-LIGHT monster effects activated on the field or in the Graveyard. If you do: Destroy all face-up non-LIGHT Effect monsters your opponent controls (Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to this effect's activation.) If you do: You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn in which this effect was activated. If this card on the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: You can Special Summon "Ivanthol, Paladin of Naschaga" from your Graveyard.

 

Ok, I had a couple questions. Do you summon this card with Rank Up Magic Astral's force, or some way not included yet? He is a Rank 7, as the first form is a 5. Maybe you meant to Rank-Up the second form? 

I like this card's art, but I think it may already be used somewhere on YCM, sometime recently. Still is befitting and works quite well. I like how this card is immune to card effects and destruction, but the attack seems a little high when that is considered. That could just be me, since this guy is a boss, and is challenging to summon. 

Nice work incorporating the SXyz!

You Summon him by using "Rank Up Magic Astral Force" which let you "rank up" a monster by not just 1 rank but 2!! That was the point of him being the Boss monster, hard to Summon, immune to card effects and destruction. Making him the utmost pain in the ass for people :D