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Catman25

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It isn't bad. A lot of basic elements have been neglected, though. Depth is very vague in this one. Define your subject more (I say subject because it is placed in the middle and so becomes hard to determine what the focal REALLY is). I also suggest looking a bit more into the colour wheel whilst picking your colours. They seem a bit out of tone and desaturated. I also suggest lightening the spots to a more bright value.

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Sound advice for sure, yet with the dimension restriction it becomes a little hard to follow stuff like rule of thirds, etc. With this whole series of pieces, I've been maintaining a portrait-like atmosphere, so to be honest, depth isn't exactly my biggest concern.

 

 

 

These next two are ridiculous, I know, but I did spend quite a lot of time trying to figure them out, might as well post them regardless of the outcome. And it's not sperm you pervs it's purple ooze. Next one will be better, I got my babe Topaz back.

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