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It doesn't seem to have any aim, I have no idea what it is supposed to mean or stand for. If you're just looking purely for critique on the appearance, I'd say that I never really liked the super thin fonts but I like the colors and it's very crisp, but the squiggle shape just seems out of place or even random. Same with the shape on the 'o'.

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Dude it just looks like you used the pentool for the signature thing, and rubbed out part of the o and did a bit of pentool there.

Not very impressed tbh, get better scrub

 

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Never use the term "just" when it comes to logo design, scrub. 

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Never use the term "just" when it comes to logo design, scrub. 

 

The top two have a larger and broader libretto to them. Target's logo has an infinite definitions. FedEx has only used the suggestive colour wheel theorem.

 

But what does your logo define? Surely parts of it do explain convolute but it is not of much interest. Comparing one to another: your logo is considered an outline. Outlines are generally used to provide a bigger picture; i.e., a face of a person, a building, etc. You would also make sure that with an outline you would have to balance it with forms. If you outline a building the forms would be the windows. They are rectangular slabs.

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