mikel. Posted September 28, 2013 Report Share Posted September 28, 2013 Well, the boss is... preoccupied, though I'd imagine he'd arrive sometime after Marina does. Just posted, i hope it goes like a rhyming. I mean i could change it up, i would like to know if it's well with how it flows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 28, 2013 Report Share Posted September 28, 2013 Well, the boss is... preoccupied, though I'd imagine he'd arrive sometime after Marina does. Well if I understand everything right, a little but after William and Aya reach the cafeteria to eat Britain's character along with 6-10 others somehow broke into your storage lab and managed to steal something. Your character managed to capture Britain's, though he has the helmet and the stolen files got away. Also there is some type of explosions, though where and what either haven't been specified or I missed them completely. Have I missed anything? I hope it goes like a rhyme. I mean, I could change it up. I would like to know if it flows. To be brutally honest Britain . . . it's pretty d*mn well near unreadable. Rhyming or not it is so confusing, choppy, etc. that it took me three more times than what it SHOULD have to understand a single thing you posted. In each post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted September 28, 2013 Report Share Posted September 28, 2013 Well if I understand everything right, a little but after William and Aya reach the cafeteria to eat Britain's character along with 6-10 others somehow broke into your storage lab and managed to steal something. Your character managed to capture Britain's, though he has the helmet and the stolen files got away. Also there is some type of explosions, though where and what either haven't been specified or I missed them completely. Have I missed anything? To be brutally honest Britain . . . it's pretty d*mn well near unreadable. Rhyming or not it is so confusing, choppy, etc. that it took me three more times than what it SHOULD have to understand a single thing you posted. In each post. Whoa, i guess i will need to be really clear, due to the rush in posting. *types on the i-phone* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 28, 2013 Report Share Posted September 28, 2013 Whoa, i guess i will need to be really clear, due to the rush in posting. *types on the i-phone* Never rush a post. If you feel like you're being rushed just let everyone know you cannot post right now. I'd rather have you wait for one giant good post than give a ton of bad ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted September 28, 2013 Report Share Posted September 28, 2013 AAANNNND my app is finished. Off to read the IC in the case I get accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted September 28, 2013 Report Share Posted September 28, 2013 Goddamnit, I have been really busy IRL, but I'll write up a post by late Sunday by the latest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
encapturer Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Sorry for sounding the alarm X.x But Marina didn't have much choice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Sorry for sounding the alarm X.x But Marina didn't have much choice! It's fine, the action Leiro will make is to escape, doing that might leave a sure fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Soo is my character accepted I don't want to get that far back in the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted September 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Soo is my character accepted I don't want to get that far back in the story. As much I have not had the time to look into the character in depth, from what I saw it seems okay to me however If I need anything changed I shall be sure to let you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 Well I've posted and given anyone who isn't a Foundation member something to do with the Mutant/Vanguard battle occurring in New Jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 I'm pulling out. My character is oblivious to everything and I just can't find a way to jump back in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 I'm pulling out. My character is oblivious to everything and I just can't find a way to jump back in. He is currently running from the townsfolk, right? Well we've never stated where the Foundation base is so you could have him head towards the Mutant/Vanguard battle to try and help out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 Well I've posted and given anyone who isn't a Foundation member something to do with the Mutant/Vanguard battle occurring in New Jersey. So your character can understand Chinese then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 So your character can understand Chinese then? I thought they were speaking English since you never said they were speaking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 He is currently running from the townsfolk, right? Well we've never stated where the Foundation base is so you could have him head towards the Mutant/Vanguard battle to try and help out. I suppose. I'll read up on what's happening and try and come up with something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 "Shi turned back to see his co-worker and told him to keep an eye on her, and that he didn't trust her. Not that she could understand, since she wasn't of Chinese descent, which was fairly obvious." I admit, I could have reworded that entirely to make it easier to understand, so that part is my fault. I meant to put that they were speaking in Chinese. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 I admit, I could have reworded that entirely to make it easier to understand, so that part is my fault. I meant to put that they were speaking in Chinese. Well I'll go change it when I have the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 So what happened is that soldiers came down and are inhibiting the storage, and more people are to come. Ok, i will post like in 3 days because am stack with college essays, that time of the year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted September 30, 2013 Report Share Posted September 30, 2013 Yeah, I'm still not sure how to approach this. All exits have been sealed off, and I might just get myself more in a pickle if I show myself to security. I'll just stay on the roof until the Vanguard arrives. That seems like the best (if not only) option for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted October 4, 2013 Report Share Posted October 4, 2013 I'll just stay on the roof until the Vanguard arrives. That seems like the best (if not only) option for me. The Vanguards have arrived to suppress the "rioting" mutants. So I would suggest jumping in to aid your fellow mutants or possibly striking up a deal with the Vanguards to make it so you don't get added to the possible list of dead mutant bodies that might come out of this situation . . . [hr] On another note, Britain if I read your post right, you have had your guy use his gravity power to make a wrecking ball outside explode into the warehouse and aid in getting your guy outside. Am I right? If so . . . *sighs and rubs the bridge of my nose* The Foundation has already been stated to be halfway buried inside a mountain. As one would think that the only places that were exposed would lead to rudimentary and not high priority areas, say a room to house basic supplies. I don't think an experimental lab would be ANYWHERE near the outside area of the base. Secondly, why would there be a bulldozer (which you then said was a wrecking ball) on the outside of a heavily defended base? Outside of plot convenience of course . . . Also I highly doubt the Foundation's walls would be brittle enough not to withstand a decent sized impact from a bulldozer or wrecking ball- after all it's been stated that no one has managed to get in. With that information one could assume that a LOT of attempts have been made and a bulldozer or wrecking ball would've been one of the first things tried . . . If you wanted a way to knock the Guards down and make your escape then why not use your gravity powers to knock them down? You said it only took a twitch from his fingers. So the guards probably wouldn't notice before it was too late. You could knock the down, give your little quip, and then escape. Also I know you're trying to make your posts "rhyme" but for the Love. Of. GOD! Just make what your characters SAYS rhyme or please stop . . . I hate repeating myself but I had to read your post 3-4 times. [hr] Tormented? Kyng? << >> Am I really the only one of the hosts who is actively working on the plot? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikel. Posted October 4, 2013 Report Share Posted October 4, 2013 Sorry, The Foundation has already been stated to be halfway buried inside a mountain. As one would think that the only places that were exposed would lead to rudimentary and not high priority areas, say a room to house basic supplies. I don't think an experimental lab would be ANYWHERE near the outside area of the base. hmm, i didn't read that..goddamned me If you wanted a way to knock the Guards down and make your escape then why not use your gravity powers to knock them down? You said it only took a twitch from his fingers. So the guards probably wouldn't notice before it was too late. You could knock the down, give your little quip, and then escape. so, i will edit post Also I know you're trying to make your posts "rhyme" but for the Love. Of. GOD! Just make what your characters SAYS rhyme or please stop . . . I hate repeating myself but I had to read your post 3-4 times. Oh really, i did intent on having him unable to speck fluent English, i will go sure careful as i type so i it's not confusing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted October 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2013 I'm waiting until my RPing partner actually posts, as of right now I'm lifeless. I was planning on having the prologue for the first 2/3 pages of posts and then move onto a chapter however you have been completely oblivious to the fact that I had a plot point in one of my posts and are going straight to do your own thing and cause a "story" I never had planned a full on Riot for the sake of having a riot, more an execution attempt which caused a riot also I have taken a week of work, so all my rps, all my designing areas and shops have been put on hold until I start working again, I'm relaxing and not going too in depth with things. What has occurred is rather than having my getgo to cause anything, something is occurring without my consent this isn't necessarily a bad thing but I would rather have someone ask if they can do something if it heavily impacts the story, now I'm unsure when the executions are going to occur as it was going to be the first major boiling point (I'm just saying I've only really skimmed over the posts until I get back into posting so I have missed a vital part of this then be sure to let me know) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
encapturer Posted October 4, 2013 Report Share Posted October 4, 2013 Hmm... we can always change the posts so that instead of going to stop the riot, we're going as security detail at another location since the Vanguard think someone is trying to stop the executions. The Nexians get the true location anyway, and then... yeah. Or maybe the people we execute are the people causing this riot. We can plot through this riot easily enough if we agree on what generally happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted October 4, 2013 Report Share Posted October 4, 2013 I was planning on having the prologue for the first 2/3 pages of posts and then move onto a chapter however you have been completely oblivious to the fact that I had a plot point in one of my posts and are going straight to do your own thing and cause a "story" I am not a mind reader so if you HAVE something then, by all means, please PM your co-hosts so we know what the Hell you're planning. As such we have had nothing going on so as a co-host I thought I should give everyone something to do and at least give them a direction so we can get this thing rolling. Also I have taken a week of work, so all my rps, all my designing areas and shops have been put on hold until I start working again, I'm relaxing and not going too in depth with things. That I can understand and, again, you could've told everyone this. If you had and I missed it I'm sorry. . . . I'm unsure when the executions are going to occur as it was going to be the first major boiling point. How about having the riot, the Vanguard captures everyone there, and then they are slated for execution which results in the Foundation and Genesis are forced to act. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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