Within You Without You

[L0SS]

I wanted to create something cosmic and ethereal, so I took some Beatles music as inspiration and created this. The composition is actually pretty simple, but it created a strong image, that just about portrays what I had in mind. CnC is appreciated.

 

Soundtrack: 

http://youtu.be/ljnv3KGtcyI

[Night]

Everything seems plastered and nothing coexists.

 

The concept is intriguing but doesn't have any depth, which would be alright if the execution was better. 

The only thing that works is the pattern BG, the space stock ruins it however. 

I'd recommend removing the space stock altogether because it also makes for terrible lighting. 

 

The crack texture is a cool addition but it's blended terribly. 

 

Quick! Catmang show us that one tag that used the same crack texture. 

[Catman25]

Imo, cracks on the hair would work better if she was like marbelized as in a statue, or rather just erased. I like the atmospheric qualities, but translucency of the woman makes it almost too atmospheric

 

 

Edit: Night our collab I think used it, idk what otehr tag you'd be talking about.

[L0SS]

Everything seems plastered and nothing coexists.

 

The concept is intriguing but doesn't have any depth, which would be alright if the execution was better. 

The only thing that works is the pattern BG, the space stock ruins it however. 

I'd recommend removing the space stock altogether because it also makes for terrible lighting. 

 

The crack texture is a cool addition but it's blended terribly. 

 

Quick! Catmang show us that one tag that used the same crack texture. 

Plaster is my middle name. But yes, you're right. I needed a bit of time to re-evaluate it, and I can't agree with you enough. But the thing is, just, space. I kind of want that element there, because the idea was that the woman represents the earth, and obviously space (which is basically nothing but you get what I mean) is surrounding her.

 

 

Imo, cracks on the hair would work better if she was like marbelized as in a statue, or rather just erased. I like the atmospheric qualities, but translucency of the woman makes it almost too atmospheric

 

 

Edit: Night our collab I think used it, idk what otehr tag you'd be talking about.

Okay, I'll have a little play around with the statue element.

 

Thanks, guys.

[Night]

Imo, cracks on the hair would work better if she was like marbelized as in a statue, or rather just erased. I like the atmospheric qualities, but translucency of the woman makes it almost too atmospheric

 

 

Edit: Night our collab I think used it, idk what otehr tag you'd be talking about.

 

The b/w one with the guy sitting on the chair. 

That was yours right? 

[Catman25]

Duuuude that was from like '10. But I found it.

 

 

 

 

With the apparent translucency of the woman, the cracks aren't too well blended as Night said. I guess both the texture and stock should have relatively the same opacities.

[Night]

Duuuude that was from like '10. But I found it.

 

 

 

 

With the apparent translucency of the woman, the cracks aren't too well blended as Night said. I guess both the texture and stock should have relatively the same opacities.

 

Bitch I know you better than you know yourself.