L0SS Posted August 28, 2013 Report Share Posted August 28, 2013 Hope Tormey won't mind me posting this. It's not exactly radical, but it's the first thing I've done in a good while. I like the old-film quality to it, it sort of reminds me of a 70's crime thriller (The French Connection style), even if that isn't quite Noir. Just fancy some CnC, although I know there isn't loads to comment on here. Thanks people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 29, 2013 Report Share Posted August 29, 2013 With the focal, I can see why you have the two distinct light sources, but I think it could be improved upon. Regardless I think the lighting does a good job to make the blending work. Besides that, it looks like you went a bit overboard on the gradient maps. The yellow is a bit strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted August 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2013 With the focal, I can see why you have the two distinct light sources, but I think it could be improved upon. Regardless I think the lighting does a good job to make the blending work. Besides that, it looks like you went a bit overboard on the gradient maps. The yellow is a bit strong. I had better lighting, but I sacrificed it for more 'Noirness'. And yeah, the yellow is strong, but without it, it didn't look very 'Noiry'. I thought that might give it that old-style edge, almost a cross-processing effect. Thanks for the feedback, pussy cat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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