Retrained Archetype Contest(Closed)

[Avaren]

*deleted*

[TFMegamanlan]

TFMegamanlan, can you post your cards?

 

I'm currently making them. I'll post once I have enough to fit the minimum requirements of the contest.

[NeoRWBY65]

Okay. Since there are now 4 contestants, 1st place and 2nd place will get prizes. 3rd will get a prize if more people join before the deadline.

[TFMegamanlan]

Here's my Entry:

[spoiler=entry]

Monster Cards

[spoiler=Chaos Knight]


Original Monster: Celtic Guardian

When this card battles a Warrior, Beast-Warrior or a Dragon-type Monster, Destroy that Monster (without Damage Calculation). This card can attack twice each Battle Phase. When this Card is Destroyed, Destroy 1 "Chaos" Monster, treat it as Destroyed in Battle.

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[Spoiler=Chaos Magician]


Original Monster: Dark Magician

When a "Chaos" Monster is Special Summoned, you can Special Summon this card from your Hand; if you do, you cannot Normal Summon or Set this turn. When this card inflicts Damage; Banish a "Chaos" card: Destroy 2 Spell/Traps in play. When this card battles, No Spell or Traps can be activated.

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[spoiler=Chaos Hundun]


Original Monster: Masked Chopper

This card cannot be Destroyed in Battle. Once per turn, Banish a "Chaos" Monster in your Graveyard: Target 1 Monster your Opponent controls: That Monster's ATK becomes 0 and is unaffected by other effects. If your Battle Phase was ended by a Card Effect: Discard this card; this turn, you get a Second Battle Phase. (All Monsters may attack again) You can only have 1 "Chaos Hundun" in your Deck.

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[spoiler=Chaos Healer]


Original Monster: Dian Keto the Cure Master, Numinous Healer

When your Lifepoints become 0 while you control only "Chaos" cards in your Field and Graveyard: Banish this card from your Hand: Your Life Points become 8000. If you activate this effect: Banish all Monsters you control; then Shuffle all Monsters in your Graveyard and your Hand into your Deck, then Draw 2 Cards. You can only activate the effect of 1 "Chaos Healer" per match.

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[spoiler=Chaos Summon]
When 2 or more Monsters are destroyed in the same turn, (and during either player's turn) during the end of a turn phase, you can Banish those destroyed Monsters equal to an Anagolmos Monster in your Extra Deck to Special Summon an Anagolmos Monster who's Anti-Level is equal to the Levels of the Banished Monsters.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Chaos Herald - Tri-Fighter]


Original Monster: Goblin Attack Force, Attack Force Monsters

Banish 3 Destroyed by Battle "CHAOS" Monsters.
This card cannot Special Summoned except by Chaos Summon. This card cannot attack Directly. Twice per turn, This card cannot be destroyed. This card can attack 3 times. When this card attacks Banish 1 "Chaos" Card from your Graveyard; this card gains the Following effects: • 1st Attack: If this card attacks a Defense Mode Monster, inflict Piercing Battle Damage. • 2nd Attack: Negate the attack Target's effects. • 3rd Attack: When this card destroys a Monster in Battle, inflict damage to Opponent equal to the destroyed Monster's ATK.

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[spoiler=Chaos Herald - The Fallen Emperor]


Original Monster: Number 39: Utopia ( this is based on his Japanese name more... Aspiring Emperor - Hope)

Banish 2 Destroyed Monsters
When this card is Chaos Summoned, Target 1 Banished Monster used to Chaos Summon, Special Summon that Target. Once per turn, you can Send 1 "Chaos" Monster from your Hand or Field to the Graveyard: Target 1 Card your Opponent controls, Destroy that target. When this card battles, No other effects can be activated.

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[spoiler=Infinity Tank - Lord of Chaos]


Original Monster: Machina Fortress

1 Tuner + 1 or more "Chaos" Monsters
You may Discard 2 "Chaos" Monsters to Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard). If you do; Target 1 Anagalmos Monster in your Graveyard: Special Summon that target regardless of Summoning Conditions. When this card Attacks; Discard 1 "Chaos" Card, Destroy all Spell/Traps Opponent controls. Your Opponent cannot activate Card Effects when this effect is activated. Twice per turn, If this card is targeted by an Effect: Banish 1 "Chaos" Monster in your Graveyard: Negate that effect and Destroy 2 Cards in play.

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[spoiler= Number C0 - Gaia Unicron, Lord of Chaos]


Original Monster: Gaia Plate, The Earth Giant

3 Level 12 DARK or EARTH Monsters
If this card is destroyed: Special Summon this card, and if you do: Target 2 Banished cards, Equip them to this card as Xyz Materials. You can only activate this effect if a Field Spell in play. If a "Number" or "Chaos" Monster is equipped as an Xyz Material to this card, this card gains the Following Effect:
• You may Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: When a Monster is Destroyed this turn (except "Chaos" Monsters) inflict damage to its control equal to its ATK. If this card has Xyz Materials and Destroys a Monster; Special Summon 1 "Rock Token" (Rock-type, DARK, LV1, ATK: ?/DEF: ?) The Token's ATK and DEF is equal to the ATK of the Destroyed Monster.

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Spell Cards

[spoiler=Chaos Wave]

Banish 1 "Chaos" Monster in your Graveyard: Destroy all Monsters your Opponent controls. During the End Step this turn, Destroy up to 3 "Chaos" Monsters you control.

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[spoiler=Rank-up-Magic - Chaos Force]

Banish 1 "Chaos" Monster in your Graveyard: Target 1 "Number" Xyz Monster in play, Take control of that target if you don't control it; then Special Summon 1 "Number C" Xyz Monster from your Extra Deck using the Target as Xyz Material. (The Special Summon is Treated as an Xyz Summon and the Xyz Material equipped to that Xyz Monster are equipped the new Monster as well) During the End Phase, Shuffle 2 Banished cards into your Deck. (This effect does not target)

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[spoiler=Chaos Recovery]

Return 3 "Chaos" Monsters in your Graveyard; then Special Summon a Banished card. Then for each of your Banished cards: Banish a Card in an Opponent's Graveyard.

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[spoiler=Chaos World]

When a Monster is Banished: That controller may Draw 1 Card. Once per turn, you may Discard 1 "Chaos" Card, Destroy 2 Monsters in your Deck. If you Chaos Summon a Monster, add 1 Banished card to your Hand. (This effect does not target). If a "Lord of Chaos" is in play, Destroy this card and 2 Cards in Opponent's Hand.

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Trap Cards:

[Spoiler=Chaos Call]

During your turn, if you control no Monsters you can activate this card from your Hand. Discard the Top 2 Cards of your Deck: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Chaos" Monster from your Deck. When that Monster is Destroyed, Banish a "Chaos" Monster in your Graveyard.

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[spoiler=Chaos Counter]

Banish a "Chaos" Monster in your Graveyard: Negate the Activation of a Spell, Trap or Monster Effect and Destroy it. Then Send 1 "Chaos" Monster from your Hand of Deck to the Graveyard for Opponent to Discard 1 Card.

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[Phoenix Dragon]

My Entry:

[spoiler=cards]Glory Element of the Raging Earth -Gaia

 

Monster; Effect
Level 7
EARTH
Divine-Beast
ATK 2700
DEF 2650

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Must first be Special Summoned on top of a face-up EARTH monster you control, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. When this card is Summoned: Target 1 face-down card on the field; destroy the target, and if you do, inflict 1000 Damage to the Opponent. When this card leaves the field, the monster(s) under this card stay on the field as they were before. When there are no monsters underneath this card, destroy it.

 

(Remake of Gaia The Fierce Knight)

Glory Element of the Blowing Winds - Silpheed

Monster; Effect
Level 4
WIND
Divine-Beast
ATK 1900
DEF 1700

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Must first be Special Summoned on top of a face-up WIND monster you control, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. When this card is Summoned: Target 1 card on the field; return the target to its owners hand. When this card leaves the field, the monster(s) under this card stay on the field as they were before. When there are no monsters underneath this card, destroy it.

 

(Remake of Silpheed)

 

Glory Element of the Searing Flames - Horus

Monster; Effect
Level 9
FIRE
Divine-Beast
ATK 3000
DEF 1900

 

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Must first be Special Summoned on top of a face-up FIRE monster you control, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. When this card is Summoned: Target 1 face-up card on the field; destroy the target. No cards and effects can be activated in response to this effect. When this card leaves the field, the monster(s) under this card stay on the field as they were before. When there are no monsters underneath this card, destroy it.

 

(Remake of Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV?)

 

Glory Element of the Deep Waters - Daedalus

Monster; Effect
Level 10
WATER
Divine-Beast
ATK 2500
DEF 2000

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Must first be Special Summoned on top of a face-up WATER monster you control, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. When this card is Summoned: discard 1 card from your opponents hand. When this card leaves the field, the monster(s) under this card stay on the field as they were before. When there are no monsters underneath this card, destroy it.

 

(Remake of Levia-Dragon - Daedalus)

 

Glory Element of the Perfect  Nature - Doriado

Monster; Effect
Level 12
LIGHT
Divine-Beast
ATK 1400
DEF 1900

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Must first be Special Summoned on top of a face-up "Glory Element" monster you control, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. This card's Attribute is also treaded as FIRE, WATER, WIND and EARTH. Cannot be destroyed by other cards (either by battle or card effects). When this card leaves the field, the monster(s) under this card stay on the field as they were before. When there are no monsters underneath this card, destroy it.

 

(Remake of Elemental Mistress Doriado)

 

Glory Call of the Elements

Spell; Normal

Add "Glory Elemental" monsters with different Attributes from your Deck to your hand for each face-up monster with different Attributes on your side of the field.

 

Glory Element - Stone of Sage

Spell; Normal

After activation, choose 1 Attribute (FIRE, WATER, EARTH, WIND), then Special Summon this card treated as a monster (Rock/?/Level 1/ ATK 0/DEF 0)  on your side of the field. The Attribute of this card is then treated as the one you chose.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=rulings to the cards underneath]

Monsters underneath a "Glory Element" are still treated as cards on the field, but neither as a Monster, Spell, or Trap Card and they also cannot be used (to attack or use their effects and permanent effects of those "monsters" are not applied). Therefore, cards and effects (like Raigeki-Break and Phoenix Wing Wind Blast) that target only "cards" on the field can still target and apply effects on those "monsters". Cards that destroy "all cards on the field" (like Judgment Dragon or Black Rose Dragon) can still destroy all those monsters of a pile in 1 wipe. However, cards that target explicit "Monster Cards" or "Spell and Trap Cards" cannot be used to target or destroy those cards. Also effects that "destroy all monsters on the field" only afffect the top Glory Element; the others stay in play as the last line of them state.

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Thank you. =)

[EPTinYugi]

Here are my entries:

The Main Deck:

[spoiler=Machine King]

Effect: This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each other FIRE monster on the field. Once per turn: You can tribute 1 FIRE monster on your side of the field; to inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of its ATK.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Witch of the black forest]

Effect: Once per turn: when a Level 4 or lower FIRE monster sent from the field to the Graveyard by your opponent; add 1 FIRE monster with 1500 or less DEF from your Deck to your hand, then inflict damage equal 300 x the Level of the monster added to your hand by this effect. This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster, except for the Synchro Summon of a FIRE or Spellcaster-Type monster.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Tyrant Dragon]

Effect: This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by a FIRE or Dragon-Type monster. During your Battle Phase, if your opponent controls a monster after this card's first attack: You can tribute one FIRE monster on your side of the field to have this card can attack once again. If a Trap Card targets this card and destroys it: You can banish 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard; and inflict damage to your opponent equal to its attack.[/spoiler]

 

The Extra Deck:

[spoiler=Summoned Skull]

Effect: 1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can roll a six-sided die. You can Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your hand whose Level is equal to the number rolled.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Herald of creation]

Effect: 2 Level 4 monsters

Once per turn: You can discard 1 monster, then target 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard with a Level equal to the Level of the monster you discarded; add that target to your hand, you can then detach 1 Xyz material from this card, to inflict 200 damage to your opponent equal to the Level of that target.[/spoiler]

 

 

 

Spells/Traps:

 

[spoiler=The Rage]Effect: When a FIRE monster is targeted and destroyed by your opponents monster (battle or effect): You can inflict damage to your opponents life equal to number of Spell/Trap cards your opponent has on the field.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=The Power]Effect: Pay 500 Life Points to use this cards effect. Once per turn: when a FIRE monster is sent from your side of the field to the Graveyard; you target 1 Level 6 or lower monster on your side of the field, that target gains 200 ATK equal to the number monsters in your Graveyard.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=The Field]Effect: Once per turn: when a "Pyroic" monster you control is destroyed by battle; You can choose 3 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your deck, then your opponent randomly picks 1 of them to add to your hand, and you discard the rest.[/spoiler]

 

 

Hope I can enter. Have a good day! 

[NeoRWBY65]

accepted

[AzNPaladin]

Can I join?

[AzNPaladin]

Can I join?

Never mind, I can't join. I got a lot of homework.

[SunKistRebelution]

I would like to join this as well. Are written cards allowed?

[NeoRWBY65]

I would like to join this as well. Are written cards allowed?

Yes. I thought I put that at original post?

[SunKistRebelution]

You did, I just overlooked it. My bad.

[SunKistRebelution]

So, I have had a lot of fun making my cards and may or may not have carried it all into a boss monster that is entirely made up. Is this okay or should I go repurpose another oldie-but-goodie?

[NeoRWBY65]

So, I have had a lot of fun making my cards and may or may not have carried it all into a boss monster that is entirely made up. Is this okay or should I go repurpose another oldie-but-goodie?

If you look at Malefics, they have a boss that isn't based on any previous card, so go ahead.

[SunKistRebelution]

So this archetype is called "Paradox Body" is something generated by the following things, along with subliminal influences:

-the Malefic archetype

-desire to revive old Ritual cards

-love of the Fiend-type

 

The mythology justifying the 'retrained' aspect of this set of cards is that the monsters of this set are different versions of existing monsters from an alternate timeline that has collided with our own, spilling the group over in the process. The original cards are referenced in the effects of the retrained cards. Those cards outside the internal spoiler are the rest of the archetype. Sorry that they aren't spoilered; I'm having trouble with getting that to happen for some reason.

 

Anyway, the goal here is to Special Summon the main monsters by banishing their existing Ritual counterparts from the Deck. They can then banish the usual Ritual card accompanying that monster to gain another effect. The added effects typically focus on the destruction of other cards. Without further ado, here they are!

 

[spoiler: Paradox Body]

[spoiler: Retrained Monsters]

Paradox Body: Revived Chakra

Fiend/Effect/Dark

7/2450/2000

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Chakra" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "Resurrection of Chakra" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: once, add 1 "Paradox" Spell card in your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

Paradox Body: Zorc, the Tyrant

Fiend/Effect/Dark

8/2700/1500

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Dark Master-Zorc" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "Contract with the Dark Master" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls; inflict damage to your opponent equal to 100 X the Level of the destroyed monster.

 

Paradox Body: Demise, Living Apocalypse

Fiend/Effect/Dark

8/2400/2000

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Demise, King of Armageddon" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "End of the World" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: once, during either player's turn, you can destroy all cards on the field, except this card.

 

Paradox Body: Destroyer Garlandolf

Fiend/Effect/Dark

7/2500/1400

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Garlandolf, King of Destruction" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "Ritual of Destruction" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: once, destroy all other face-up monsters on the field with DEF less than or equal to this card's ATK. This card gains 100 ATK for each monster destroyed by this effect.

 

Paradox Body: Garma of Blade

Fiend/Effect/Dark

7/2550/2150

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Garma Sword" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "Garma Sword Oath" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: once, add 1 "Paradox Body:" monster in your Deck or Graveyard

to your hand.

 

Paradox Body: Anarchist Mage

Fiend/Effect/Dark

8/2800/2600

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Magician of Black Chaos" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "Black Magic Ritual" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: once per turn, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field; inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Paradox Body: Masked Behemoth

Fiend/Effect/Dark

8/3200/1800

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "The Masked Beast" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "Curse of the Masked Beast" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: when this card destroys a monster as a result 

of battle, either increase this card's ATK by 200 points or destroy 1 card on the field.

 

Paradox Body: Zera Finality

Fiend/Effect/Dark

8/2800/2300

-Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Zera the Mant" in your Deck. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn. You may banish 1 "Zera Ritual" from your hand or Deck to have this card gain the following effect: once, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field.

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-SPELLS------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Parallel Paradox

Continuous Spell card

-Once per turn, you can shuffle 1 Ritual monster into your hand to your Deck; then, add 1 "Paradox Body:" monster in your Deck to your hand.

 

Paradox Tactical Ambush

Continuous Spell card

-Whenever a card is banished due to the effect of a "Paradox" card you control, inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Paradox Artillery

Equip Spell card

-Equip this card to a "Paradox Body:" monster. If the equipped monster destroys a monster, it can attack once again in a row. You can double any battle damage the equipped monster inflicts to your opponent by banishing 1 card in your Graveyard.

 

Warp Paradox Zone

Field Spell card

-When a "Paradox Body:" monster is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 banished Ritual Monster mentioned in the effect of the removed monster, regardless of summoning conditions; then, you can shuffle 1 banished Ritual Spell card into your Deck.

 

Paradox Inducing Physics

QP Spell card

-Negate a card effect that targets a "Paradox" card you control, and if you do, destroy that card.

 

-RITUAL BOSS----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Paradox Embodiment Ritual

Ritual Spell card

-This card is used to Ritual Summon "Paradox Body Lord, Ezzaiah". You must also Tribute 2 "Paradox Body:" monsters you control (they are treated as Level 6 monsters). Shuffle all banished Ritual Monsters into the owner's Deck; for every card shuffled into the Deck due to this card's effect, "Paradox Body Lord, Ezzaiah" gains 500 ATK. When this card's effect resolves, banish it.

 

Paradox Body Lord, Ezzaiah

Ritual/Fiend/Effect/Dark

12/0/3000

-This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell card "Paradox Embodiment Ritual". When this card is Ritual Summoned, destroy all other cards on the field. Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn, in addition to this card. If this card is targeted by a card effect, you can banish 1 "Paradox Body:" monster in your Graveyard to negate the effect, and if you do, destroy that card.

 

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Paradox Body Elite, Ezzoh

XYZ/Fiend/Effect/Dark

7/2800/2500

2 Level 7 Fiend-type Monsters

-Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn, in addition to this card. When this card is XYZ Summoned, the owner of this card draws a card. Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can detach 1 XYZ Material from this card to shuffle 1 banished card into your Deck; then, inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Paradox Body Elite, Ezzieh

XYZ/Fiend/Effect/Dark

8/2900/2700

2 Level 8 Fiend-type Monsters

-Only 1 "Paradox Body:" monster may attack each turn, in addition to this card. When this card is destroyed, add 1 of its XYZ Materials to your hand. Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can detach 1 XYZ Material from this card to negate the destruction of a "Paradox Body:" monster.

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EDIT: I ended up photoshopping the art of the original cards so that it appears aesthetically different. Then I made cards. Hope you like 'em!

EDIT: Fixed some minor card text errors from the first drafts, e.g. ritual spell and ezzieh.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

What are the deadlines?
I might join. Retrained can actually change the outlook of an archetype, right?

[EPTinYugi]

What are the deadlines?
I might join. Retrained can actually change the outlook of an archetype, right?

October 5. That's what it said in the front page. It might be longer if there's not another judge, I don't know.

[SunKistRebelution]

Yes it can change the outlook, TGM. Just like Toon and Malefic did, or, for a more recent example, my Paradox Body archetype on the page before this. *cough*shameless*cough*

[NeoRWBY65]

If three more enter before the deadline, 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place will get prizes. As it stands now, only 1st and 2nd place will.

[SunKistRebelution]

Is this over? Has everyone submitted their cards?

[NeoRWBY65]

Everyone that's entered has submitted cards, but it's still open to more people.

[SunKistRebelution]

Isn't this over now?

[EPTinYugi]

Isn't this over now?

 I believe deadline is where nobody else can enter, not really that it'll be over on this day, possibly tomorrow or the day after.

[NeoRWBY65]

Did TechGenusMaster join? If he did, the winner will be announced when he puts in his cards. If he didn't, then I can make the decision now.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

I never did join. I wanted to re-train the Tech Genus, but never got around to it.

I might not have enough time now, so it depends. I end up forgetting contests way to often...is there a way I can get notified about them? I have forgot about 2 now, and I don't want it to happen again.

Sorry about it!