Aesirson Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 This is a Fan-Fic I made a time ago, but now i decided to translate it to English. Prologue The day was sunny and calm, untill...Lex: AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!!!!!! I missed it again!Man: Sorry, the opening tests for the Duel Acadamy ended half an hour ago.Lex: Oh, man! If it continues like this, I'll never come into that school!Man: Don't worry, there's a chance tomorrow too.Lex: This time I'll set my clock for ringin!Lex walked home, sad because of the incedent.Lex: Man, I don't think my deck would have been anything either, I better get a new one soon!At the way home, he visited a card shop and bought som new cards for his deck.Lex: Hm... Pot of Avarice, that would proboaly be a good card! And This card, One Man Standing* too!That night, he dreamed about himself, sitting in a empty place with only his deck by his side.Lex: This deck is nothing to have, I don't even have any monsters with more than 2200 Attack points!Creepy Voice from Nowhere: Lex!Lex: Oh man, now my cards are angry for what I said to them!Creepy Voice from Nowhere: LEX!!!Lex: Hey, maybe it isn't my cards!Creepy Voice: Oh my god!Lex: Hey! Whose there!Creepy Voice: I'm the god of duels!Lex: Yeah, sure!God: Hey, it's true!Lex: Nuhu.God: Uhu!Lex: Alrigth! If you are the god of duels, then give me a good deck!God: Alright! That was what I was going to do...*Lex deck started to shine.Lex: Wow!Lex looked down on his card, there was a monster called X-Draman*, it looked very cool!Lex: Well then, give me the Blue-Eyes White Dragon!God: Hey! Don't push it!Lex then woked up.Lex: Man! It was just a dream!Lex picked up his cards.Lex: well, looks like I have to win with... Hey, whats this? X-Draman?!Lex was so shocked he fell out of his bed and knocked his head.Some hours later...Lex wakes up and looks at the clock. Lex: I don't know how my deck changed because of a dream, but the tests ends about half an hour! Better skip breakfast today!And then he runned.... Chapter 1: The First Duel! Lex runned and at last he got to the School Tests.Man: Hey, isn't you the guy from yesterday?Lex: Yes! That's me! Let's just get this done so you can send me to that place!Man: Alright, follow me here. Nad take this please.The man handed a School Duel Disk to Lex that directly put it on his left arm and puted his deck into it. Tha man showed Lex to the Arena.Man: So, I will be your opponent. If you win or lose makes no sence, because you are probolay going to the school anyway. The duel is just to see if you are a Slifer Red, a Ra Yellow or a Obelisk Blue!Lex: Yeah, I know! It's time to duel!Man: Duel!Lex: I start!Lex drawed a card.Lex: I play X-Dra - Drill Horn*, In Attack Mode! I also play a Face-Down Trap card! Your turn!A big monster appeared in front of Lex.Man: That cards attack is just 500, thats nothing compared to my Chainsaw Insect! Then I attack!Lex: My X-Dras effect activates! Drill Horn, Dig Down!The Dragon digged a hole in the ground and dissapeared.Man: No problems for me! Then I attack you directly!Lex: No! Because of my Dragons effect, you cannot attack me directly with a monster with more than 2000 Attack!Man: Argh! Your turn.Lex: Thank you! I think I activate my Spell Card, it's called Call of the Dragonguy! Now I can throw away 2 cards in my hand to Special Summon X-Draman to the field! Then I also plays this card! Pot of Greed! It lets me draw 2 cards from my deck. I then plays the Field Spell: X-Arena*! And thats not everything! I activate my Trap Card, Dragon's Rage! I also uses the special abillity of X-Draman! He can fuse with every X-Dra monster that exists, so say hello to: X-Draman - Earthquaker*! I uses his special abillity to swith your Insect to defense position, and with a combo of my X-Arena and Dragon's Rage, you loses 3100 Life Points! And thanks to your Insects abillity, I can draw a card! Nad I choose to play that card facedown directly! And that ends my turn!Man: That was an impressive move, you made my Life Pints to be only 1900! Well, this is the end of you! I play this card! Monster Reborn and special summons my Insect and then tributes him for Zaborg The Thunder Monarch and destroys your X-Draman!Lex: Not so fast! I activate my Trap! Ring of Destruction! And I choose your Monarch, we both loses 2400 Life Points and that makes your down to zero! I win!Man: Yeah, I think so, well, you will be a Slifer Red!Lex: WHAT! Wouldn't I be a Obelisk, I totaly destroyed you!Man: Yeah, but the rules are like this: If you win with at least 3000 Life Points lef, you are a Obelisk, if 2000 you are a Ra, but in any other case, you are a Slifer!Lex: MAN!!!!Well, and now we leave Lex for this time... So, what do you think? *First appearence of a made up card. To see the made up cards, I'm going to make a thread in the Written Cards-forum with all teh made up cards in this fanfic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeLen Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 It's not bad. Personally, I don't like Script form fanfics, but it is still ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted March 17, 2008 Report Share Posted March 17, 2008 Nice introduction to the story. Kinda weird, but I suppose it's ok. Funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted March 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2008 Currently updating with Chapter 1! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted March 17, 2008 Report Share Posted March 17, 2008 I'm sorry but runned? Isn't it ran? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeLen Posted March 17, 2008 Report Share Posted March 17, 2008 You have many grammar problems, and when a monster is summoned...let me show you, so things will be easier. I'll show you an example. "I summon Blue Eyes White Dragon!" PokeLen shouted. (3000/2500) "Then, I attack directly to win the duel!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted March 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2008 Oh, sorry... Well, I think there will be a new Chapter later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted March 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2008 OMG! My computer crashed and whole my Fanfic was gone :'(I'll start a new one soon... Im very unhappy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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