L0SS Posted July 7, 2013 Report Share Posted July 7, 2013 Yes, I like space. Not entirely sure if this works, and I think there is definitely some room for improvement. As always, CnC appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted July 7, 2013 Report Share Posted July 7, 2013 Your colors are a bit unnatural/forced. In addition I feel as if the focal point is the space right in the middle. I can see some good depth development, but your choice of render kinda detracts, as it's kinda flat. If you are using gmaps, try to change the opacity to get colors that aren't as strong, or just combos that aren't too contrasting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted July 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2013 Your colors are a bit unnatural/forced. In addition I feel as if the focal point is the space right in the middle. I can see some good depth development, but your choice of render kinda detracts, as it's kinda flat. If you are using gmaps, try to change the opacity to get colors that aren't as strong, or just combos that aren't too contrasting. I can go overboard with those Gmaps. And I agree, the focal is definitely in the centre. I want to keep the detail there, but I want to draw the focal point out towards the render. I'll try and work on that. Thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted July 8, 2013 Report Share Posted July 8, 2013 I think the colors are just ugly, or at least not pulled off well enough to work. Try using easier colors to master like, pink, yellow etc. Much easier to produce lighting with colors which are defined with a light source. Also the random splats of greenyellow hurts my eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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