L0SS Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, I've made a tag, especially for you. <3 CnC appreciated. Edit: Gonna work on a V2 tomorrow, this deffo needs some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 I thought this would by a RWBY tag. You disappoint. c:The text seems bad to me, the render coloring is not good, the background is a bit meh, you could've incorporated more better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted June 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 I thought this would by a RWBY tag. You disappoint. c: I shall make it so. The text seems bad to me, the render coloring is not good, the background is a bit meh, you could've incorporated more better. I hate adding text, but I wanted to break it up. How do I make it look good? It never does. Any ways to improve the colouring? Wasn't sure how to make the isolated colouring look right. The background could definitely be better. V2, ahoy! Thanks, Neph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ire Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 So, I do not like The light source is not well placed. The reflections are just on the render in front of us ... in this case, do not hesitate to shed light over the render For the typo .... too blurry compared to net render well, it does not go at all with the rest of creation. You must work the typo' with creation, especially not apart ... I do not know if that's what you do, but it gives me the impression ^^ " Uh .... the background ... it's just a fractal, a light effect and a C4D ... And once again, the render is too clear to the rest .... Really, I am disappointed .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 Also, I might be wrong, but the lighting is bad. The view shows it coming from the render's front, but you show it coming from his side. Also, try checking out some color schemes, stocks, etc, and use a lot of blending effects and adjustments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ire Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 Also, I might be wrong, but the lighting is bad. The view shows it coming from the render's front, but you show it coming from his side. Also, try checking out some color schemes, stocks, etc, and use a lot of blending effects and adjustments. I totally agree with you... it needs more work And... fractal breaks the flow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted June 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 Okay, we all agree it needs work. I'll change it for tomorrow. I was a little... rushed. Probably not a good idea to rush a tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 A good tag at least takes me several hours, if to do a tag with stocks and all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 A good tag at least takes me several hours, if to do a tag with stocks and all. Yeah but gais this is Neph we are talking about. Like srsly Plainy don't worry about this guy, he is such a noob. Several hours on a tag... ANYWHO at first I thought it was another tag for me *see my user title* that being said I don't think colours have been incoporated that well. And LQ Fractal at the back just doesn't flow that well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted June 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Yeah but gais this is Neph we are talking about. Like srsly Plainy don't worry about this guy, he is such a noob. Several hours on a tag... ANYWHO at first I thought it was another tag for me *see my user title* that being said I don't think colours have been incoporated that well. And LQ Fractal at the back just doesn't flow that well. Holy balls, did not see your title. That's kinda weird. I just liked the render, and so thought I'd incorporate the rose thing. Yeah, I think a bad fractal, meh background, bad colouring and little to no flow kills anything that I was trying to achieve. Like I said, it was a rushed job. I'll try and make something better using the render, although I think I'll start from the beginning with it. Cheers, Tormey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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