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The bars at the top and bottom feel really awkward to me.

The text doesn't fit.

The C4Ds(?) seem just slapped on, and the bg is meh.

I don't really like it that much, to be honest. :s

You're kind of spot on, to be fair. I just threw a load of stuff together in the hopes that it would work out. I didn't think that the text fit either, but I wanted as a sort of contrast to the sig, to stand out and to relate to the bolder, 'gamer' aspect. The only thing I will disagree with, is the bars. I thought it made it more cinematic, if you will. They might be better at a smaller size, though. Thanks for your input, I think I need to start spending more time on the composition of my tags.

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One less saturated bar (the one on the bottom) instead of 2, it would have been nice ....
The text is not clear enough for my taste.
Typo: I think it would be better with more colors (green, yellow or anything but flashy colors, which go well with the rest of the sig ') ...
Too much blur on the BG: I know this is to add depth, but suddenly you can not see the whole C4D.
The render is a bit too saturated for my taste ...
Not enough light just left of the render (not quite agree with the light source just above the render), and perhaps a second small light source, should be smaller, and cut by the borders of the sig '...
I hope you will come to translate everything ... ^ ^ "
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One less saturated bar (the one on the bottom) instead of 2, it would have been nice ....
The text is not clear enough for my taste.
Typo: I think it would be better with more colors (green, yellow or anything but flashy colors, which go well with the rest of the sig ') ...
Too much blur on the BG: I know this is to add depth, but suddenly you can not see the whole C4D.
The render is a bit too saturated for my taste ...
Not enough light just left of the render (not quite agree with the light source just above the render), and perhaps a second small light source, should be smaller, and cut by the borders of the sig '...
I hope you will come to translate everything ... ^ ^ "

I think I got it all. :D

 

I'll trying playing around with the idea of the bars, they're sort of growing on me.

I think the text is generally pretty unfitting, but there was literally nothing that I liked the look of.

Extra colour would probably suit it, but I started with a bad comp, and tried to make the best of a bad thing. On reflection, that wasn't a good idea.

Definitely too much blur, now I look again. I didn't really like the C4D to begin with.

The saturation was to try and emphasise the lighting, which evidently didn't work out.

Taking a second look, a lower light source would have looked better.

 

Thanks for that. I'll take your ideas, and the general composition improvements, on board.

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