[Plain] Assignment Numero Uno.

[L0SS]

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None of them are perfect by any stretch of the imagination, but I tried to make them all kinda different.

[Paradox~]

1 > You should work the flow and the light and remove the yellow color (or change it).

2 > It's monochrome, try to add another colors which will marry with the colors of your render. Try also to embed the render with the C4D's.

3 > Remove the squares and the text and lower the opacity of your light source.

[L0SS]

1 > You should work the flow and the light and remove the yellow color (or change it).

2 > It's monochrome, try to add another colors which will marry with the colors of your render. Try also to embed the render with the C4D's.

3 > Remove the squares and the text and lower the opacity of your light source.

Good points. The first seemed to be a hard one, as think I was trying to force the lighting too much, and the C4D could definitely be a different colour. Two was probably the most rushed, which is why there isn't much too it. I'll try and spice it up. With three, I can easily whip up a logoless and adjusted version.

 

Thank you.