The guardian ark, episode 2

[tazeel3]

"We can go!" "Not" "Why?" Yuma was surprised by Astral's reply "Because Shark and Rio aren't here" "Mmmm, it's true. And strange. Shark and his sister never arrived later."

Meanwhile...

"Faster, faster!" was shouting Rio. "That isn't a jet, is a motorbike!" replies his brother. "I know, but there is reaching!" Durbe could see is face reflected on Shark's motorbike "Stop now, Reginald! Barian's can run up to 300 per hour if well-trained! You cannot leave me behind!" Shark'face was angry, but, in a moment, he began to smile and to slow down. Durbe was exulting "Ah! You understand that you have to give up!" but Shark gave him a strange answer, "If you can't negate the attack, banish the monster! Hold on Rio!" Shark turned quickly, but Durbe was running too fast and he could just go straight. "As I had expected. Now come on, Yuma and others have waited long enough. To the harbour!" He was saying, but at the first turn, they found Durbe at the end of the street. Shark, with a murderous look, said "I don't want to stop, so he has to move!" and accelerated. But when he was in front of Durbe, the alien jumps and drops Shark with a handful from the motorbike, and fortunately Rio manages to stop the motorcycle near. Shark was still trying to get back on their feet that Durbe launched a Barian sphere-cube, trapping inside him and Shark.

Inside the sphere

Shark, furios, asked to the Barian "What do you want from me?" Durbe smiled and said "It's natural. I want to duel with you. And if you didn't know, you can't get out until a Barian decides that. And I will release you only after you defeat me, so ... you can do only one thing." Shark knew what and prepared himself to duel. Durbe said "Good choice, Shark" turned in its true form and activated his duel equipment. Then they said, togethere "Duel!"

Turn 1: Durbe

"Rio, warns Yuma that we have aliens problems, but we will solve them in a quarter of an hour" "Ok" Then she tried to call Yuma but.... "The duel gazer is on, but there isn't anyone on the screen. That's strange...."

At the harbour

"Go Hope! Attck Ethere...." Yuma was about to give the order to attack, when the duel gazer began to play. "It's Rio!" He said, enthusiastic. Rio's face appeared in front of him, but did not speak. "Rio?Rio!" he called, but don't get answers "Rio where are you? What's going on? Where is Shark?" Silence. After some time, the call ended. "That's strange. What are happening?"

Over a skyscraper

The cloaked figure watched amused the effects of the time bender. "Ahahahahahah! thanks to this device that I put on the duel pad of the humans in the area around their the time will slows down in a terrifying way!"

Near the sphere

"Nothing to do Shark, Yuma does not respond!" Shark looked furious Durbe "You may know what you're doing?" Durbe calmly replied, "If you think I have to do with the fact that your sister can't call Yuma, I'm not the cause of the problem" "And then you can know what is it?" "I have no idea and I don't even care. It's my turn, Draw!" "First of all i summon Holy Lightning-Wings!" A pair of golden wings descended from a yellow hole . "Then i activate it's effect, that when is summoned i can special summon a Holy Lightning monster from my hand! Come out, Holy Lightning-Books!" and from another yellow hole descended a book "And then i activete Books effect! I can send a card from my hand to the Graveyard for special summon one Holy lightning monster from my hand, and i summon Holy lightning-Sword!"

Holy Lightning-Wings
Lv 4 Light Fairy
ATK 1200 DEF 1800

Holy Lightning-Books
Lv 4 Light Fairy
ATK 1600 DEF 1400

Holy Lightning-Sword
Lv4 Light Fairy
ATK 1400 DEF 1000

"His number is coming!" Shark muttered "I know what you're thinking: That now I will summon 102. But for this Duel I thought to do something a bit different" "What?" askeed Shark "You will see! I activate Abyssal Legion! When i active this card, all the monster on my field change attribute in Water increase the level of one for each monster on my field (Wings Lv 4-7) (Books 4-7) (Sword 4-7)!" The light over the three monsters was trailed off and they turned blue. "What do you want to do with those monsters?" the answer came shortly after "I overlay the level 7 Holy Lightning Wings, Books and Sword!" The three monster became completly blue, and after shooting in the air "Xyz summon!" the rep portal was opened, and three monster go inside. Then was an explosion. "Then appear the God of all the sharks! The avenger of the Fiji's sea! Dakuwanga God Shark!" everyone expected to see a shark, but it appeared...... a mere man.

Dakuwanga God Shark
Rank 7 Water Sea sepent
ATK 0 DEF 0

"And this would be the god of all the sharks? I was expecting something more threatening" "Never underestimate your opponent's monsters. I finish the round with a card face down" Durbe thought "Does not seem to say anything. Maybe when he see him in action ..."

Turn 2: Shark

"It's my turn. Draw!" "Then i summon Big Jaws!" The shark exit from the water on his field

Big Jaws
Lv 3 Water Fish
ATK 1800 DEF 300

"Then i special summon Shark Stickers thank his effect!"

Shark Stickers
Lv 3 Water Fish
ATK 200 DEF 1000


But then Durbe made his moves "I activate the Quick-Spell card Demise of the Land! When my opponent special summon a monster i can active this card, that allows me to search a field card in my deck and active it! And i chose Umi!" The zone around them became a seabed "Until this card is on the field, the ATK and the DEF of all the Fish, Sea Serpent, Aqua and Thunder-Tipe monster are increased of 400 (Big Jaws 1800/300-2200/700) (Shark Stickers 200/1000-600/1400) (Dakuwanga God Shark 0/0-400/400)!" "Thank Durbe! Now i can crush you faster!" "Are you really sure of that?" "Uh?" "I activate Dakuwanga's effect! Until Umi is on the field, he gains 3000 ATK, and can't be destroyed (Dakuwanga God Shark 400-3400)!" The man turned into a huge shark! "This does not change my plans! I overlay the level 3 Big Jaws and Shark Stickers!" The two monster became blue and after shotting in the air "Xyz summon!" The red portal was opened, and the two monster finish inside it. After there was an explosion. "Appear Submersible Carrier Aereo Shark!"

Submersible Carrier Aereo Shark
Rank 3 Water Fish
ATK 1900 DEF 1000

"Thank to the effect of Umi he gains 400 ATK and DEF (Submersible Carrier Aereo Shark 1900/1000-2300/1400), then i activate his effect! By deteaching an Xyz Unit, i can inflict you 400 life points for each card in my hand! I have 4 card, so i can inflict you 1200 Life points!" The monster fired 4 missiles, but Durbe was prepareted "I activate Dakuwanga's effect! When my opponent active an effect that chose one of my card as a target or inflict me Life Points, by deteaching an Xyz Unit, i can negate that effect and destroy the card!" The Xyz unit went inside the monster's mouth, then he charged eating first the missiles, and after Shark's monster!

[a bad post]

Okay Rinne locked the other thread again for a reason. It doesn't even look like you tried to improve your writing. You still have grammar and spelling mistakes, the chapter is far too short,  and you don't seperate your dialogue, so at times its hard to tell whose even talking.  

[bury the year]

Locked once more.