Funky6399 Posted June 9, 2013 Report Share Posted June 9, 2013 This is my signature in about 1-2 years. I am very rusty and N00by. CnC is much appreciated. XFC here http://funky6399.deviantart.com/art/Portal-Signature-376795599?ga_submit_new=10%253A1370751912 Have Fun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted June 9, 2013 Report Share Posted June 9, 2013 Okay, this will be my first time CnCing someone else's design, so feel free to take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm far from experienced. The first to note is that this feels messy, both in terms of the physical aesthetics (the C4D stuff), and in terms of colour. Although the render is focal, this is hampered somewhat by the popping colour on the render and random splashes of colour and darkness. I think the orange glow from outer stuff alone would have been enough to draw out the tag, toning down the other areas. Depth has been achieved well, and it's obvious that you know what you're doing as far as the basic composition is concerned, but this feels a little lacking in cohesion and flow. The text also feels slapped on, and doesn't really do anything for the tag. The ingredients are there, I just think it's been left in the oven for too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted June 9, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2013 The text is just something I added in like 20 seconds i should just have deleted it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted June 9, 2013 Report Share Posted June 9, 2013 Whoa dude, that doesn't look like your work at all. Colors, c4d, texture, comp all random. You know what to do. GET BACK AT IT AND WORKING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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