[Kai] Assignment #1 [COMPLETE]

[Kuroda Kaito]

[Tag 1]

 

[Tag 2]

 

[Tag 3 - not my best]

[Yondaime]

Personally number 3 is my fav. It could do without the text though. 1 seems to crowded and 2 seems too empty and a little oversharpened.

 

Keep them coming! Can't wait to see more from you.

[.Rai]

I do like the third the best. The colour scheme is subdued, but has very good colour balance. I'd recommend some sort of g-map to subdue the blacks of the C4D some more. It stands out unnecessarily for me. Text seems artificial; I'd remove it. Atmosphere's lovely.

Second is a good experiment with depth. It's ambitious, while simple, but I think has been executed perhaps slightly underwhelmingly. A lot of sharp edges. Watch out for those.

First one does feel crowded, as Yondy said, but it's a decent piece of art with some control over the piece. The tonal range is rather limited and dark though. More focus needs to be made on the focal.

Overall, a good set for the first assignment, I say. Three fairly distinct styles. I'd like to see you work on the second more, because it can be advanced in quite a lot of ways to get a unique style. Third one is also a nice style. The background interests me, because it reminds me of mixed media. Perhaps you could experiment with textures, and prints?

[Kuroda Kaito]

Personally number 3 is my fav. It could do without the text though. 1 seems to crowded and 2 seems too empty and a little oversharpened.

 

Keep them coming! Can't wait to see more from you.

 

I do like the third the best. The colour scheme is subdued, but has very good colour balance. I'd recommend some sort of g-map to subdue the blacks of the C4D some more. It stands out unnecessarily for me. Text seems artificial; I'd remove it. Atmosphere's lovely.

Second is a good experiment with depth. It's ambitious, while simple, but I think has been executed perhaps slightly underwhelmingly. A lot of sharp edges. Watch out for those.

First one does feel crowded, as Yondy said, but it's a decent piece of art with some control over the piece. The tonal range is rather limited and dark though. More focus needs to be made on the focal.

Overall, a good set for the first assignment, I say. Three fairly distinct styles. I'd like to see you work on the second more, because it can be advanced in quite a lot of ways to get a unique style. Third one is also a nice style. The background interests me, because it reminds me of mixed media. Perhaps you could experiment with textures, and prints?

Thanks Yon and .Rai for your helpful advices. About the 1st tag, I actually had no idea what I was doing. Just basically render + C4D + a little effect + about 3-4 layers of g-maps -> there you have it. 

 

The 2nd one, I ran out of idea at that moment so....i'll work more with the 2nd one to reduce the emptiness of the piece.

 

The 3rd one turns out to be a nice piece after all.

 

So overall, i'll pratice more, especially with the 2nd one :D So thank you so much.....:D