Lunar Origins Posted June 3, 2013 Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 Aaand I'll try again tomorrow, I think I'm losing it today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted June 3, 2013 Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 You thought wrong.This is a wonderful tag. I'm loving the color scheme. The render looks well placed withing the c4d, and the lighting is perfect. Your improvement is remarkable. You have a lot of potential. Keep em comin'! I look forward to seeing more from you. And I'm anxious for a collab! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted June 3, 2013 Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 Man, this is great.You're growing so fast.I'm jelly. >.<Can I have the render? c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 3, 2013 Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 A bit flat in my opinion, depth is lacking in this one. I'm also seeing that you've beginning to develop a fondness to that bubble effect. Try to experiment more, whatever you were doing with the planet one, keep doing that. The unique tags and concepts are the ones that are remembered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 [spoiler=hereitis][/spoiler] Also, I do love that bubble effect; I'm impartial about it, though, because I know it makes my tags look... well, stale, but it's consistent. I'm not sure what else to try, though... hn. I wanted to make a neon-esque tag next, but I'm confused as to how to do it. Oh well, back to the drawing board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted June 3, 2013 Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 =oUm...jpg? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 I upload .pngs but all I get are jpegs. //crai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted June 3, 2013 Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 ^imgur does that to all formats for shits and giggles, even gifs're jpgs on imgur he di'nt listen to my advice D: JK, pretty cool. Love the colors, but that's because I whore the OranglePurple GMap on screen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 I don't seem to know what Neg. space/ blank space is. I just like empty areas, which is what I think you mean, but I'm yearning to try something other than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted June 3, 2013 Report Share Posted June 3, 2013 Okay, wanna give you one piece of advice which I'll expect you to follow better than I did, atleast - read up on design elements. Understanding these changes your outlook on many things in design which in turn allows you to execute more creative concepts. You seem to have a basic grasp of most of them, but getting to know them in their core is essential for greater progress. What I mean when I talk about negative space is, generally, the space around and between your focal, and it usually, for better exposure, contrasts with your focal. You apparently have a good feel when and how to achieve this. In particular I feel you could've done better in this piece, specifically, in many elements. Firstly, what I consider you to be good at already, the negative and blank space. You've tried here, and the try is valiant and shows, but generally, in tags which have this smooth transition feel to them, you should use darker tones to build into the lightened focal. Also, what you might want to work on, *and by work on I mean google it and look at images*, is depth. This tag looks pretty flat. In general C4D spammers use the C4Ds to achieve a greater feeling of depth by showing the different layerings the focal goes through. Work on this, not necessarily with C4Ds, but consider what is in front and what is behind. The last thing I have to, and can, because it's 12pm here, say, is to work on making pieces multicolored, steering away from single color dominance. This can be hard to achieve, because I feel the most common color adjusters you use are Gmaps and the likes which take very careful work to still maintain the availability of color - check out what people on Tagfreak and the likes do - lots of colorful stuff. The last point may be influenced by how much I used to spam these color schemes and may still be appealing to many others. /endproblematicawannabe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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