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Honestly you've improved more in the past 3 days than I did in 3 months, It's obvious that you've got potential.

 

As for the tag, I like it but I feel as if everything in the piece is stiff, the planets don't have that much depth to them, the render looks iffy on the edges, doesn't look natural but it goes with the concept so I can't really complain. 

The lighting looks a bit plain and unnatural as well. Really love what you did with the empty space on the left, the faint dark objects off in the distance really flesh the piece out and give it proper depth. 

 

The fact that you manipulated that empty space so cleverly tells me you've been taking the cnc to heart, well done. 

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Thanks a bunch!

 

I... didn't honestly think I'd do this render any justice when Tormy presented it to me.  I wanted to create something surreal, yet a little retro.  Really all I was focusing on was trying to get some depth in the image- which I guess is what I got, but I'm still learning how to fuck around with planets.  No clue as to how I go about getting them sexy looking instead of a plain-jane dead space.

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