Catman25 Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 I love the concept, and the range of colours. Quite uplifting actually.The bubbles are ridiculously sharp though. The few in the front are also really, really dark. You have a rather subdued range of tones elsewhere, and there's this crazy dark black that takes up like a quarter of the canvas. Probably need a little bit of a blur, since it's otherwise distracting to what should be the focal: the woman.It's a strange one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 I feel the render isn't suited that well to what you are going for. It looks like worlds are ending and then there is some random girl behind it like "hai gaizzz dnt mind mez just looking at de galzixs dyineng" I also feel behind it is a little empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 I'm sure I used that planet stock before. I like the concept, execution is lacking though. Pretty LQ in my opinion, and very choppy in some areas. Blending is also the worst of it, I feel as if the same problem I had using that stock was that white BG. I also think the focal could have been avoided, something a bit more abstract would have been more logical in my opinion. Definitely a step up from what you had before though, just watch your quality and blending. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted June 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 ? Not sure where the quality derailed on this one. Very few gmaps and no topaz. I can see the blending issue, and I think it was because the planets had the white bg I had to manually select to screen the nebula over it. No excuses, but yeah I'll definitely take into account everything mentioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 Concept is amazing, but the feel it gets across is that you had the amazing idea shown but didn't know what to do with it; the stock seems stuck in between the main focus. Bubble masks and the likes look cool, but overdone and too layered, as well as, to an extent, oversharpened. Makes it look pretty LQ. Color scheme could be much better with the stock wall recolored to a darker tone; trying something like that would increase the general wow-factor of it all. The stocks focal should be given more space to breathe, here, in particular; some subtler hints of more noticable flow and depth wouldn't hurt it. Though, in the end, it's very appealing to the eye, just keep it up. Try to reduce white in tags, though, generally - makes them more interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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