Merci Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 I made this for my girlfriend four months ago, during Valentine's. I asked her what Pokemon she imagined herself as and she said 'Snorlax', so I thought 'why not' and went ahead and made her that.Well. She's my ex now, but that's unimportant. I also drew myself as an Espeon~ I haven't really drawn anything since then, although I am considering drawing a few things for an RP I'm planning. So I don't think my drawing ability has improved in the slightest. Anyway, what do you think? Any way I can improve? As you can probably see, tons of things still elude me when it comes to this kind of stuff, most notably depth. I have no idea how to create depth, no matter how hard I try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 If we are talking at a Graphical Aspect then a better background with better text. However the drawings are pretty good, I feel the arm on the left of your character is a little thin and the sleeping position is a little awkward but not half bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted June 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 I don't think the arm looks thin at all. In fact, it looks pretty good in my opinion. But I do admit that the sleeping position is a bit weird, it'd be better if she were more horizontal. As for better background and better text, what do you expect me to do? O.o I mean, this was for Valentine's Day, and that means... well, lovey-dovey stuff. Pink skies and cloud hearts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted June 1, 2013 Report Share Posted June 1, 2013 I wasn't expecting a visual masterpiece for a background if that's what you mean ^^ It's just the emboss looks out of place the pinkish skies don't tend to occur all to often. >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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