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The Devil Bat's Diary[One Piece RP/Not Accepting]


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No I can see your point. My knowledge on the further along one piece characters are limited so I wasn't aware of Rob Lucci. And I apologize for the mistake with the swordmaster thing. Even so other than that, it was that you mentioned that he already mastered the martial art. It didn't give your character room to grow further with his fighting style. That's most likely what we were trying to get at. I felt that it stifled your character's growth in certain aspects.

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Well I agree with the point you made about Rob Lucci and theb io honestly isn't a very big deal. Though I am worried that you may present that level of gore within the actual IC and that's not what we're looking to establish in terms of combat for this RP. Again, the main problem with your character is their combat capabilities. As Hotaru has stated, your character has already mastered every level of Rokushiki, unlocking a seventh level. I told you to not go overboard with it initially so that your character can learn more of Rokushiki in the future but you didn't do that. Furthermore, your character is described as being an "Expert Swordsman" in the app which further adds to the your character's already overpowered combat abilities. Devon is just too powerful in his current state and that mostly stems from the Rokushiki.

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So here are my options for my two problems:

 

Either tone down the gore in the bio or leave it be, but have him become disgusted with himself and swear off violence.

Get rid of the swordsmanship all together and nerf Rokushiki or keep both, but make them considerably weaker.

 

If I do make the necessary changes like what I have above, maybe even more, can I still be a part of this RP?

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While you are more than welcomed to spruce up your application, I am afraid that I still won't be accepting your app. However, as I have stated earlier there may be an oppertunity for more crew members later, but as of right now I don't know if that will happen. If that does happen, and both Blu and I agree to adding another crew member, I will pm you first to ask if you are still interested before putting the notice out in the OOC. 

 

To answer your other question, doing either of those things, I believe, would be fine.

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That's kinda what I meant. While I'm still not accepted, I'm still kept in mind hence still being a part of this. You guys will invariably need more crew members eventually when the situation calls for it, with the Straw Hats being an example of this, and for plot movement and development. I'm always here, so when you need crew members, give me a shout.

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Alright guys, the IC has been posted. Basically your intro posts will just be your characters searching through town with no clue on how to find the crew. On the second round of posting, one of you guys will successfully find the crew at the port while the other two characters will deal with a situation Hotaru has in store. You can choose amongst yourselves who will be the one that finds the crew and who will be the other two that doesn't. Happy posting :D

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