L0SS Posted May 16, 2013 Report Share Posted May 16, 2013 V2 Up. [spoiler='Sig'][/spoiler] I really don't know what to make of this. I wanted to evoke the sense of sleaze that is so well portrayed in the New York setting of Taxi Driver. Although I think I ended up with something a little lacking in cohesion. I at least attempted a little bit of interesting lighting and contrast. As for the text, it's resting on his gun; but it's hard to make out so I might try something different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted May 17, 2013 Report Share Posted May 17, 2013 Render needs to be a little lighter and the text is just meh. Some sharpening would be nice as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted May 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2013 Render needs to be a little lighter and the text is just meh. Some sharpening would be nice as well. Definitely agree with you on that. I'll make the render more visible. And yeah, I'm going to integrate the text more interestingly into the image. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted May 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2013 V2 up. I think it might be worse than the first, but hey-ho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted May 17, 2013 Report Share Posted May 17, 2013 It's not as bad as before, I'm still not really fond on the empty space on the top right but never the less an improvement. Text still seems to stand out a bit to much, try lowering the opacity or playing with the blending options. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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