Vxsar Posted May 15, 2013 Report Share Posted May 15, 2013 Something I just edited in like a hour or so. Feedback is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted May 18, 2013 Report Share Posted May 18, 2013 Welcome to the forum. Honestly, I don't like it. It's too yellow, and there' too much of the smoke that's not blended in properly. Too overdone imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted May 18, 2013 Report Share Posted May 18, 2013 If I was completely honest (note: blunt/harsh/etc), I'd say this is just terrible. Why? List of Reasons Why • The random red paint splatter brush strokes where the original red glow was, the eye section being the most prominent. • The sword glow and highlight is just messy, ugly, overdone, etc. You've turned the design of the sword into just a messy curved blob. • Bad blending of almost everything. • How does the grass fit in in anyway? • Way too much of a yellow hue. • LQ smoke and stuff not blended in nicely. • Any focal? Could probably think of more if I tried, but these are the ones from the top of my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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