ELEMENTAL HERO PLASMA ALIUS

[AllxNightxLong]

Hello everyone, I'm new to this forum so please bare with me :) I've noticed when I take a look at cards people have made there text is clear and easy to read but mine is not? How can you enlarge the text? For now I will but the effect of the card at the bottom of the page :)

 

 

 

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EFFECT

 

 

THIS CARD IS TREATED AS A NORMAL MONSTER WHILE FACE-UP ON THE FIELD OR IN THE GRAVEYARD. WHILE THIS CARD IS FACE-UP ON THE FIELD YOU CAN NORMAL SUMMON THIS CARD TO BECOME AN EFFECT MONSTER WITH THIS EFFECT.

ONCE PER TURN YOU CAN ACTIVATE ONE OF THESE EFFECTS.

. SPECIAL SUMMON ONE "HERO" MONSTER FROM EITHER PLAYER'S GRAVEYARD

. DISCARD 1 CARD; ADD ONE "HERO" MONSTER FROM YOUR DECK TO YOUR HAND.

WHEN THIS CARD IS NORMAL SUMMONED WHILE YOU CONTROL NO OTHER MONSTERS YOU CAN GAIN AN ADDITIONAL NORMAL SUMMON THIS TURN. IF "ELEMENTAL HERO PLASMA ALIUS" BECAME AN EFFECT MONSTER THE TURN IT WAS SUCCESSFULLY NORMAL SUMMONED IT GAINS THIS EFFECT; NEGATE THE EFFECTS OF ALL FACE-UP MONSTERS (INCLUDING THIS CARD)

 

What are your thoughts on this card? Do you think it would better Hero Beat Down Decks? Do you think it's OP?  Please leave your thoughts in the comments :)

[WolvenDoom]

Dude pic is epic but effect isn't

 

1. the cards set is Elemental hero not just hero (lol)

2.it is a bit two long  

[Umbra]

The effect becomes hard to see if it's too long, due to how the card maker works.

 

As for the card itself, I'm not sure as to how balanced or unbalanced it is. It can easily make Rank 4 Xyz's simply through its effects, or it can be kept on the field in order to negate effects. It's also a very powerful searcher for the archetype(s), allowing the player to search out any HERO from their Deck without a cost.

 

I would say that it's overpowered and could use a fix; some discard cost or LP payment to use the effect, and a removal of the effect-negation would make it more balanced.

[AllxNightxLong]

The effect becomes hard to see if it's too long, due to how the card maker works.

 

As for the card itself, I'm not sure as to how balanced or unbalanced it is. It can easily make Rank 4 Xyz's simply through its effects, or it can be kept on the field in order to negate effects. It's also a very powerful searcher for the archetype(s), allowing the player to search out any HERO from their Deck without a cost.

 

I would say that it's overpowered and could use a fix; some discard cost or LP payment to use the effect, and a removal of the effect-negation would make it more balanced.

Thanks for the advice, I'll make some ajustments.

The effect becomes hard to see if it's too long, due to how the card maker works.

 

As for the card itself, I'm not sure as to how balanced or unbalanced it is. It can easily make Rank 4 Xyz's simply through its effects, or it can be kept on the field in order to negate effects. It's also a very powerful searcher for the archetype(s), allowing the player to search out any HERO from their Deck without a cost.

 

I would say that it's overpowered and could use a fix; some discard cost or LP payment to use the effect, and a removal of the effect-negation would make it more balanced.

Maybe if it negates it's own effect, would that make it more balanced? I tried to copy Destiny Hero Plasma to a card where it would see more play and be competitive. And i see your point about there being no cost to activate it's effect to " add card to hand " I'm thinking about taking that effect out or giving a cost of 2000 LP to activate that effect, since it's basically a +2 because of Stratos. As for the Special Summon of a hero, I'm sticking with that effect since every other deck can SS easy. and go into XYZ for dayz lol

The effect becomes hard to see if it's too long, due to how the card maker works.

 

As for the card itself, I'm not sure as to how balanced or unbalanced it is. It can easily make Rank 4 Xyz's simply through its effects, or it can be kept on the field in order to negate effects. It's also a very powerful searcher for the archetype(s), allowing the player to search out any HERO from their Deck without a cost.

 

I would say that it's overpowered and could use a fix; some discard cost or LP payment to use the effect, and a removal of the effect-negation would make it more balanced.

I made a few adjustments, thanks for the advice.

Dude pic is epic but effect isn't

 

1. the cards set is Elemental hero not just hero (lol)

2.it is a bit two long  

 

And the Problem being a Elemental Hero and not just HERO is?

[Blake]

.... Whoawhoawhoa, this is insane.<br /><br />This makes Elemental HERO Stratos look like a tame opening, and Stratos is still arguably banworthy.<br /><br />This takes the design of that and says "Oh it's a Gemini so it's fine"... But it's not. At all.<br /><br />Its last effect is just over the top and wrong. Look at Neos Alius. What does it DO for the fact that it's a gemini? Nothing. IT's supposed to just benefit from Gemini Support while not doing much of anything beyond "supporting" Neo-Spacians.<br /><br />The chances of opening this aren't that bad, considering if you run 3 of this, 2 E - Emergency Call, and Reinforcement of the Army, there is no reason you should have a hard time getting your hands on this for first turn. On top of that, it's even potentially a double summon, which is just over the top... And then that negation effect...<br /><br />This is just completely and totally over the top in every sense, the flavor's meh at best, and it's way, way too powerful. It's not as good after Turn 1, but opening this T1 seems like something that would just snowball for the rest of the game.<br /><br />It's horrible design that is either not good enough or tips the game in favor of the one who gets it off ASAP waaaay too much.<br /><br />Lock.