Calsifer96 Posted May 1, 2013 Report Share Posted May 1, 2013 Following a storyline with more than a few twists; the main character Raikiri Sato falls from the sky, and lands in an empty field over a deep canyon city that is filled with luminescent diamonds. The cause of his fall is simple, he was thrown out of a hovercraft by his former family; far enough from the ground to cause amnesia. This story is about action, adventure, and eh; maybe some romance which seems to be thrown into all the novels I’ve read –personally-. Neya is fairly lush planet 50 times the size of earth; with only one small desert. I am currently looking for someone to collaborate with on this! Maybe to help add some details about the planet’s Geography, characters, creatures, etcetera! I could also use help with dialogue. If you’re at all interested email me at [email protected] or [email protected] I post this thread for the simple reason that I would like to get some opinions on the basic story (that’s been shared) it’s still a WIP between me and a private collaborator; and I just started working on it today.. Character Bios Raikiri Sato[Name Subject to Change] ::Physical Description:: His skin is pale, his hair is white, and his eyes are blue. He wears a tan sleeveless shirt and dark green hooded jacket, with blue jeans and wears no shoes. ::Historic Facts:: Raikiri Sato was born 5 years after the Great Walter War. Raikiri’s family was on the short end of the stick in the war, as a family of mobsters they do what’s best for the family, and Raikiri was changing, for what in their opinion, was the worst; with this they took him to the Great Plain’s and threw him to the ground, causing him to forget everything about himself, and his life. Check out my work – Calsifer96 Project Page - Greydoll Check back for updates! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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