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[.Rai]

Don't feel that sparkley C4D stuff needs to be anywhere near the stock face. The contrast between left and right is perhaps too much for me, but the ambience of the piece suits the mood. Bird masks were a great touch. Fleur-de-lis is an appreciated flourish that doesn't distract too much. Flow is lost on me a little, but I don't think it matters too much here anyway. Colour scheme is stuck to a cool blue-red contrast, and the blue spacey stuff is awesome. A few strange sharpening anomalies scattered throughout (edges of the woman, torso; some of the dodged/screened C4Ds).

Overall, a pretty decent piece all round. Reminds me that I should get to making some art.

[chairman ali]

The transition between cultures here is very sharp and doesn't work with the composition. 

What I generally mean is that there was a sudden shock with the design. You started off with a space/galactic look but then you shocked it with a more studio photography design.

Make it interact don't make the design a sudden. Also, remember what I said about the edges? Don't place things on the edges, it takes away from the armature.