Aqua Girl Posted April 25, 2013 Report Share Posted April 25, 2013 [spoiler=human] Name: Naoj (Joan Seinah) Gender: F Age: 18 Height: 5'9 Race: Human Deck(s): Vampire Control (JZ said a few Created cards were okay) [spoiler= extra cards] Not gonna lie I sort of rushed them to get to the RP so don't Nazi me about grammar just tell me if their broken which they shouldn't be I balanced them fairly. [/spoiler] Exile: Vampire Lord (female) Physical description: Naoj has dark Blue-Black hair that extends past her waist and pale peach skin. Her eyes are a soft blue, She has a slightly above average body and isn't overly curvy but with large a DD-cup chest, she has a very mature feel to her body. She has a kind smile and an honest personality but is prone to personality switches, she does from nice and kind to Slightly... well okay Very Psychotic.... Personality:Quite the arrogant girl she usual doesn't see much of a threat from other duelists, her sights unnaturally on one person she considers her "husband". When dueling she constantly states in a cruel manner that they should be happy she is a merciful queen for letting them live.....or she could act like a housewife and almost bake someone a cake for a job well done.....it's complicated. Misc. info/fun facts: She'll act very regal in the sense that even her cards act as if she is a queen, believing only her "husband" above her [/spoiler] [spoiler= Exile] Name: Shade Gender: F Age:??? Height: 7'3 Race: (Human or Exile) Exile Exile type: Rouge (Defeated by Naoj (barehanded) and serves her loyally) Owner of card: Naoj Physical description: While technically a Vampire Lady,her power surpasses that and adorns her curvy figure in Vampire' Lord's armor, adjusting to her body, her hair is much longer then her male counterpart since she lets it down unlike a normal Vampire Lady. Personality: She doesn't like talking, though she expresses much of her emotions through facial gestures instead, she seems to have a thing for males that are not her species....probably something she learned from being around so many prissy male vampires in the duel world Misc. info/fun facts: N/A [/spoiler] OH and my favorite card is Volcanic Rat....it has LAVA CHEESE! Hope its good enough. ^-^ Oh and... *Drags JZ away then returns 30 minutes later dragging him by the leg him covered in bruises as I exhale calmly while he exhales as if his soul is departing.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avaren Posted April 25, 2013 Report Share Posted April 25, 2013 Name was the same Appearance quite different I'd say -the torso isn't a "triangle" -hair colour although still brown has lighter brown bits in it -the clothing sceme is all different (a armour like suit that is black/yellow with a bit of red vs average clothes coloured white red and blue) -glasses that's attached to the other guys head... no way this one has glasses attached to his head. Gender is the same, but that's really 50/50 Height isn't mentioned in the other, so it's assumed average. And unless I'm mistaken (based around where I live) 183cm is taller then average. Age this guy is 4 years younger (and also definitive, the other is about 24) Personaility well the other is certainly more in-depth, but shyness and the moral code are very large differences between the two, the other isn't shy at all and his morals are what drive him to act in most cercaimstances, and I didn't give any motivation for this one... but It even if he had the same set of morals, it wouldn't be as strong a point in his character, or else it would of been pointed out in this part Faction is kinda illrelivent although it has similarities between the exile/human part Bio, there is none, and even if there was one, I wouldn't of copied pasted without at least changing some details, I set that dude's bio for that personality... and deck and deck is different (also this one has no custom cards) so while I don't completely understand what Xeroxing is, what I'm getting from this is that your complaining that he has the same name? If so, changing the name is quite easy... if that isn't enough I could try a deeper end of the pool and have a go at female or if I've completely misunderstood what Xeroxing is, could you please explain it so that I can redo the app Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a coffee Posted April 25, 2013 Report Share Posted April 25, 2013 Avaren, the point I'm getting at is that there is little to no difference in the two characters you've posted. Xeroxing refers to the company that has essentially monopolized the copier business, implying that have more or less copied your last character into your character application here. Now, I don't find it incredibly appropriate to criticize you in a public thread, so if you would indeed like to join the RP, we can work on creating a completely original character over PM, should you need the help. Also, Sorry I haven't been around much to post, with finals and juries coming up in the music department, as well as my new job, my plate is full. Wave, if you get the chance to post before I do, feel completely justified in getting distracted and leaving Joe behind. I don't want to stunt your character's development. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted April 25, 2013 Report Share Posted April 25, 2013 *Blinks* can only Zai accept people orrr? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted April 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2013 Nah. We both can. But since im here.... Accepted. Cards too. Although i cant add you to the sheet yet because smartphones dont like forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a coffee Posted April 25, 2013 Report Share Posted April 25, 2013 Oh durr, sorry kneesocks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted April 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 @KneeSocks: added you to the character sheet. your bio is linked. I'm going to be announcing the brackets within a few posts. when that happens, duels will begin. We'll be running 2 duels at once to speed things up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted April 26, 2013 Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 Muwahahaha time to make the love triangle get uneasy, also if you haven't already can naoj and jazeth(Seth) be on teams?(For they double teams portion) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted April 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 I haven't done the matchups yet, but we'll see. we have another possible app coming in, so i'll need to factor that in as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a coffee Posted April 26, 2013 Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 Kneesocks, I'm going to let this one go, but can we keep the completely motiveless attacks on other characters to a minimum? That kind of stuff is going to have a negative effect on the RP, because we're going to be spending post after post trying to explain what in the hell just happened. Like I said, this time it's fine but please, let's keep this as plausible as we can get, eh? People don't just smack others and then kiss them for no fracking reason. Thanks. And while I'm at it, Let's stick to the storyline given here. Jazeth is not an existing character in our plot, soul shards have like, absolutely nothing to do with anything, and you don't have an evil aura... you're human. ....I'm sorry I missed this application before. Going back, I'm going to have to deny your application. I'm not even positive you read the rules of the RP to be honest. PM me if you want to join the RP once more with a character that makes even a little bit of sense in the world, but as of right now, that post never happened and your character has been denied. I don't mean to be harsh but if I were to approve your application, I would have to go back and approve many of the previous denials of done in the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 26, 2013 Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 She read all the rules, and she isn't affecting the plot in any way, she was just doing something for fun, she has no powers, she has no abilities that affect exiles, she was doing this mostly as a joke Maj.... also, about striking my character for no reason....shes my GF whaddya expect? Girlfriends do that...... In a way she was just trying the fastes way to interact with a character, (namely mine) she did read the rules, I read them over with her, but when she was making the application she was rushed because she had to go to work, I can name her favorite monster is Volcanic Rat.... She won't be intruding on your plot, the whole Jazeth shard thing is a recurring joke with other of her characters in other roleplays, and it's a bit insensitive to get mad at her for it. The root name from Seth is Jazeth in the first place, so it does technically make sense, besides, it's not like the plot is moving anywhere besides the possible threesome in the table next over. EDIT: humans have aura, it's a writing technique which shows off their motivations, a person with a dark aura has bad motivations, and it can actually be measured in the real world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a coffee Posted April 26, 2013 Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 If I were to accept her application, based on what was given, I would also have to accept NewDiablo's application based on what was given because there a lot of common complaints between the two applications. I understand that you're going to bat for your girlfriend, and that's fine, I respect that, but I can't accept her application. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 26, 2013 Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 I'll make sure she fixes it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a coffee Posted April 26, 2013 Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 Thank you. If she needs help, I'd be more than glad to assist her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted April 26, 2013 Report Share Posted April 26, 2013 Nope, I got it, I don't wanna change my post, but JZ understands what I mean by everything I already typed, however any inside jokes I make between me and him won't affect the story EDIT: Oh I forgot...editted my app..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 27, 2013 Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 Blarkma, I'm sure Zane would love to talk to you right now...but currently he's being suffocated by about 129 lbs of busty randomness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted April 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 well, if wouldn't be complaining too much if I were Zane. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avaren Posted April 28, 2013 Report Share Posted April 28, 2013 [spoiler=James]Name: James Gender: Male Age: If asked he will say 7 years old, although he looks around 34 Height: 183cm Race: (Human or Exile) (If Exile) Exile type: (If Bound Exile) Owner of card: (If Human) Deck(s): Knights Order (If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: [spoiler=Amren]Name: Amren Gender: Male Age: Unknown Height: Average Race: (Human or Exile) (If Exile) Exile type: Warrior (If Bound Exile) Owner of card: James (If Human) Deck(s): (If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: Noble Knight Artorigus Physical description: Mirror Image of the card. Personality: Like a BOSS Knight Misc. info/fun facts: N/A[/spoiler] Physical description: James has wavy light brown hair which reaches shoulder length. He has light blue eyes and somewhat smooth skin. He normally wears a light brown shirt with black trousers (both of which have streaks of rosewood red around the sides). Over this he wears a dark-earthy brown jacket which has 2 V-shaped red stripes on top of the shoulders which look like some sort of epaulette (which doesn't overhang the shoulder, it's apart of the jacket). The jacket is a bit heavier then expected and a little bit stiffer, but that's probably just because it's a old jacket. Personality: James is a believer in Honour, Peace and Love. But also believes that you must be careful in your actions as they pave the path for the future. James would willingly give his all for a cause he believes in and is characterised as indomitable in this. James is a bit of an extrovert, given his beliefs and offers his time to those that would ask him for it (as long as isn't required to do something else). Misc. info/fun facts: James had been born on Hermulnir, but was away seeing the world when the disaster struck. James, apart from his partner and anyone he trusts with his life, refuses to talk about his life between the incident and coming to Ophia.[/spoiler] (lack fav card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenade Posted April 29, 2013 Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 Boop boop, unexpected character development and reactions oh well shouldn't have written a bio anyway boop boop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 29, 2013 Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 in all irony, that outburst probably would make Leah attractive to Seth, but instead he'll probably just laugh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenade Posted April 29, 2013 Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 Well, the attraction route, should she go for him, could be pretty interesting. But hey, could always go for both hahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 29, 2013 Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 And so it begins! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted April 29, 2013 Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 Name: Serene Von Gregory Gender: F Age: 19 Height: 5'4 Race: (Human or Exile)Human (If Exile) Exile type: (If Bound Exile) Owner of card: (If Human) Deck(s): Nordic(Beast, Alafar, Aesir, "Full Display" Basically a mash of the three) on rare occasions lavals. (If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: Physical description: Serene has shoulder-length auburn hair that she ties in to a pony tail and blue eyes. She has freckles, While mostly obscured by her fashion choices, Serene can be seen to have slightly wider hips and a Large chest(36 double D's if you wanted to know x33) She is always seen wearing thick-framed, square glasses she normally wears an large tan sweater over a bra and tank top, with a short black skirt, knee length grey socks and black or red boots. Personality: Shes very Shy and Quiet and is quite the shut in so she likes to keep to her self but when it comes to duel monsters shes a monster. Her quick wit and sly tongue has earned her reputation. the trading circuit shes considered the Nerdy Devil (Implying Making a deal with her and not getting burned is as hard as doing the same with the Devil.). The Reasoning behind her Shyness and practically severe censoring of her body(Despite the knee high socks and short skirt still drawing attention, tho intended that way.) Is her large bust and what she considers bulky frame(Tho shes very thin and has a bit of definition to her mussels.) being the daughter of two models she is naturally gifted with a very beautiful body and it draws unwanted attention so she hides her self. Misc. info/fun facts: Shes extremely good at Dueling but is usually doing trades, She doesn't Like to show it but shes very strong for a girl of her age she once beat the crap out of a group of 5 girls that were bullying her and some other duelists(Males so they couldn't really defend themselves.) She Knows Jeet Kune Do, Tae Kwon Do and Southern Shaolin: Dragon Style. Occasionally the Norse Gods will appear as visitor Exiles for her Name: Fae Gender:F Age: Height: '2 Race: (Human or Exile) Exile (If Exile) Exile type: Rouge (If Bound Exile) Owner of card: N/A (If Human) Deck(s): (If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: Physical description: An Effect Veiler with Brown Hair Personality:Shy timid and Slightly Curious Misc. info/fun facts: Fae Is a rouge Exile. Fae Had wanted to Help Serene So badly that she materialized in the real world unintentionally ruining her card, while Serene won the duel Fae could never be apart of the duel since she had no card to be played so she watches Serene Trade helping Newbies and ripping off arrogant people. Favorite monster for her is Effect Veiler. Not really apart of the tourny just for trades random duels. Maybe something later in the story. I figured I'd make a more relateable character than naoj lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANZAI!!!! Posted April 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 @Kneesocks: Accepted. Much easier to work with. @Avaren: Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a coffee Posted April 29, 2013 Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 Let's get some Posting Order here for the duels. LEAH/SETH VS. ZANE/MATT 1. Zane 2. Seth 3. Matt 4. Leah JOE/JACQUI VS. SELINA/HIDEYOSHI 1. Jacqui 2. Selina 3. Joe 4 Hideyoshi Any problems? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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