Astolfo Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 An Original Novel Series By Neph Imagination NexusActual Logo Soon To Be Up~ This is my first creative writing series I ever posted on YCM. The story is a fantasy-action which takes place on a different planet named Kismaea in a different universe. Kismaea is a planet where magic and wondrous creatures like dragons and more existed in every corner. It wasn't all good and happy though. There were dark secrets in its past. Only a select few ever knew a fabric of reality existed. The fabric of reality once lied almost everywhere, accessible by numerous portals. However, the fabric is irrevocably linked to the rest of everything else, almost like a voodoo doll to the actual world. Seven wise people one might call wizards nowadays noticed that people were starting to grow greedy and lustful of the power of the Seros Plane - another name for the fabric of reality. For the good of everyone, they combined their massive powers to seal off the Plane from existence. However, with knowledge and perseverance, eventually, somebody will get through. To prevent this as well, they sealed off the memories of everyone alive at the time, and attached the memories to a massive tree which sheltered all of the Kismaeans. The top branches of the tree are much higher than anyone could ever climb, and so that's where the memories were stored forevermore. Unfortunately, nothing can be an invincible barrier, and so the seven - called the Ancients - created a single, indestructible key forged from a metal that fell from the stars which could grant its owner passageway to the Seros Plane. They enchanted the Skeleton Key - as it was called - so if one attempted to destroy it, it would vanish and reappear somewhere else. Also, the carrier of this key would suffer bad luck and the key would curse all the carrier held dear. The key had been hidden away though so none can find it again. Recently however, a secret group has risen, calling themselves simply 'Chaos'. They have secretly found out somehow about the Seros Plane again, and they wish to take advantage of it. If they succeed, they would become god-like. However, Kismaea's magic flows from the natural existence of kismet, and such a tainted influence on one of its core parts would ruin Kismaea, plunging it into a hell. Kismaea is what you might call conscious in a sense though, and it shall call forth someone to help it from this surge of darkness. There has always been heirs of the Ancients though, and chosen helpers, which called themselves 'Imagination Nexus'. Members of the Imagination Nexus are being assassinated in worrying amounts, and Kismaea is slowly crumbling, with Dark Kismet flowing out of the earth. An unlikely young boy with a demon mark is thrown into a fast-paced battle that had always been hidden from general Kismaeans, but now, the battle will be brought into a full tide upon Kismaea. Every last person's Kismet in their heart will rock the tables of balance as Kismaea is plunged into a full-war. Follow this race against both time and chaos itself as an epic onslaught ravages this wondrous utopia, while a young boy and his friends who will join him journey on a deadly crusade fights to save everything he holds dear… [spoiler="View If You Dare"][spoiler=Prologue][spoiler="Page 1"][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler="Chapter 1"][spoiler="Page 1"][/spoiler] [spoiler="Page 2"][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler="Chapter 2"][spoiler="Page 1"][/spoiler] [spoiler="Page 2"][/spoiler] [spoiler="Page 3"][/spoiler] [spoiler="Page 4"][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 So....this is weird. Like, not weird as in Stephen King weird, weird as in 'the fck is goin on' weird. I could barely follow this, and when I could, it still didnt make much sense. Maybe this will be fixed in the following chapter. I hope. Because as of now, this is just weird. If anyone else had posted this, I would have labeled it a no go and never set foot here again, but seeing as it's you, I'll stick with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Hollow Man Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 It's not weird, it's a pretty standard first five minutes of an anime. That's honestly my biggest complaint - I haven't seen enough here to make this stand out from shonen #1474. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 8, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 I'm posting a bit to see what people's initial thoughts and reactions are right now. If people want more, I'll post more. If not, this'll probably go to Storyhalla. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Hollow Man Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 You'll need to post more. There's just not enough here to really judge at this point. It could go interesting places, but all that's present in the prologue and first chapter is relatively generic setup. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 8, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 Writing up Chapter 2 now. Should be up by Tuesday probably. Might be a bit later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 8, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 Chapter 2 up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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