Hotaru987 Posted July 20, 2013 Report Share Posted July 20, 2013 I'm working on a post now. Sorry for taking so long, I just wasn't feeling all that well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 20, 2013 Report Share Posted July 20, 2013 I'm working on a post now. Sorry for taking so long, I just wasn't feeling all that well. No problem, hope you get to feeling better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 21, 2013 Report Share Posted July 21, 2013 I'm still working on it. Just having a bit of trouble coming up with the fighting and stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 I'm still working on it. Just having a bit of trouble coming up with the fighting and stuff.Need some inspiration?Hey Sonic, get over here! ᕦ(ˇò_ó)ᕤ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 22, 2013 Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 Well any ideas you can throw out I'll be happy to listen. I'm just not sure how I want the fight to proceed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 When it comes to writing a fight scene with an NPC, I find that, unless they're going to do a moment of monologuing, or in turn a battle of taunting, there's not really much need to go into detail in terms of dialogue. Realistically you would find these warriors are too busy trying to beat the crap out of each other to spit fire.In terms of what to write, it could not be more simple. If you are going for a fast-paced lockdown of trading blows, you needn't exceed the lines of simply describing exactly what it occurring at face value. If the fighters have a moment appart, you could bring some cognition here and have your character mull over the pain she has taken or inflicted, a battle strategy, etc.Now, Nailah is fighting a Wolf. As Nailah stands, her melee alone may be enough to contend with the Wolf, if not the Wolf may be able to somewhat overpower her in terms of raw strength. Should you follow this road, you can easily don the Wolf with some sexist attitude, on the lines of women shouldn't be fighting. Of course, Nailah is the most powerful Vanguard in this group simply due to her magical prowess, and I can easily foresee her using this to her advantage. Of course, wolves are fast, so Nailah may need to be faster still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 22, 2013 Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 hmm.....Thanks for the advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 23, 2013 Report Share Posted July 23, 2013 Gah! Finally got the post out. Your advice really helped Kyng! Thanks again! And sorry for taking so long Renegade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 23, 2013 Report Share Posted July 23, 2013 Gah! Finally got the post out. Your advice really helped Kyng! Thanks again! And sorry for taking so long Renegade. No problem, in truth today was the first day in a great many that would have been able to respond in turn. So it worked out perfectly. And I think it goes without saying that your post was phenomenal. Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2013 Bampu! =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 26, 2013 Report Share Posted July 26, 2013 Alright I'm coming around slowly. Once I post in the magician rp I'll get to this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 27, 2013 Report Share Posted July 27, 2013 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 27, 2013 Report Share Posted July 27, 2013 Hope that was good enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2013 Good enough? She sassed up against a God, that was great! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Love the post Hotaru. Anyway, handing off the baton now to Kyng to finish this up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Heh, this was a fun mission to go through, Renegade ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 It really was! It was very fun ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 It was pretty great, especially the part where Man's loincloth came off. Anyway, Chaos, you're up =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 What a lovely post Kyng. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us Sonic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 *Japanese bow* Arigotu! I hope you will all enjoy this mission!! Especially with a few twists and turns I've planned >=3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Thank you for your kind words guys. It was definitely stressful. Running an RP that isn't yours is much more difficult than I thought it would be. Hope that I didn't step on anyone's toes in the process. Off to read some posts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 XD Man and Quillan had me rolling! And for now the Japanese gods are a bore...just wait till we meet Susanoo ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Well Sonic, it isn't necessarily that they are actually boring, but more so that Quillan wouldn't like their formality and Man's mind is easily influenced, and thus easily corrupted by Quillan *insert evil laugh* Glad that I can get back to being the humorous one :D I think I am going to love this mission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Yeah, you can have that job back. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Yeah, you can have that job back. lol. No more puns? :'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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