keyblademaster20 Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Prologue: Pegasus: The Winner of the Tournament is Keichii Bakurai!Keichii: Thanks!Pegasus: Here's the Trophy and the Crimson Deck.Keichii: Thanks. Pegasus: You better not sell that on Ebay.Keichii: I know I know it's the deck that will not be sold in stores.Pegasus: There you go my boy. Keichii: I'm might give it to my son some day. Pegasus: =)-----Chapter 1 Surgeon: Your son is still not stabilized. Dad: We have to try.Surgeon: He will die!Dad: No he won’t! Surgeon: Yes he will!Dad: No he won’t!Surgeon: Yes he will!Dad: At least try for the next half-hour. Surgeon: Yes fine.Doctor: Take over!Surgeon 2: Yes sir! Dad then walked out of the hospital trying to calm his nerves. He looked really gloomy and was worried that I would die. Dad: What should I do? Why did he have to grow a tumor in his throat? He then sighed wondering what to do. He then took out a deck of Yu-gi-oh cards and faced them right side up. Dad: You always wanted to be a duelist. You even dueled behind my back and I didn’t even let you. He then closed his eyes, hoping something from heaven would help him. Lights then came out of the cards and on to the sidewalks like holograms. ?: We heard you Keichii.Dad: Oh it’s you Crimson Knight.Crimson Knight: Well what’s the problem?Dad: Davis is having surgery, but the surgeons don’t think he will survive. We can’t even stabilize him yet. Crimson Knight: The put the deck in his hand. It’s time we got a new master.Dad” Really!?Crimson Knight: Yep.Dad: My life will be shortened by an incredible amount will it? Crimson Knight: Yes that is a big risk.Dad: Oh well than.Crimson Knight: Aren’t you worried?Dad: Yeah, but this is the only way he’s going to survive. Crimson Knight: I guess so. Remember put the deck in his hand.Dad: Right!Crimson Knight: I’m going back no, but remember.Dad: Yeah whatever. Dad then ran in the emergency room, when I was still unstable and when Crimson Knight went back into its card. Dad than ran to me and put the deck on my hands. Surgeon: Doctor welcome back!Dad: What’s the status?Surgeon 2: Doctor he’s now stabilized! Dad” Ok now start the surgery!All the surgeons: Yes Sir! ~ End of Chapter ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keyblademaster20 Posted March 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2008 I didn't really spend time on the intro =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 Even though it was short, and a little too much dialogue for a prologue, but I instantly catched on to this one. Continue. Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 yes plz continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keyblademaster20 Posted March 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 OK here is another chapter. Chapter 2 The operation was soon over and it turned out to be a success! I was just a miracle kid. There was an article about me in the newspaper and now I was world wide in an hour! I was wake after the excitement died down a bit. It was 3 mins before midnight and found myself on a hospital bed. Me: Well it’s 3 mins before midnight. I had to wake up now! Dad: Oh good you’re finally awake!Me: Hey Dad.Dad: I know what you did. Me: I know and I’m sorry.Dad: Are you crazy! Your condition could have gotten worse!Me: I just wanted to duel! You never let me duel! Not even once in my life!Dad: That’s why I signed you up for duel academy! Me: I don’t care. What? Dad: I signed you up for duel academy!Me: This is a bit unexpected. Dad: Why? Me: You would never let me get close to a duel disk.Dad: Things changed. Your tumor is out and you still have your voice.Me: Good and let me go to sleep.Dad: One more thing. Me: What?Dad: You’ll like the present I out on the table right over there. I looked at the table and saw a deck of Yu-gi-oh Cards. I then looked past them and saw that these cards didn’t exist and wasn’t sold in stores. My eyes popped as I started to figure out these were the Crimson Cards! Me: The Crimson Cards!Dad: Yep.Me: How?Dad: I gave them to you or more like I passed them on to you. Me: You mean they chose me?Dad: Figure that out yourself, but now you need to get some sleep.Me: Alright Dad. Wake me up ok.Dad: OK. I was soon fast asleep for a couple of hours. Usually kids my age would imagine unicorns flying on top of a mountain. OK just kidding. I was mostly dreaming of dueling, like always, but something was different, this time my Dad let me so that was good enough. ~ End of Chapter ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Last_One Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 countinue this is awesome can you show me the deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.