Ren✧ Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 2 Level 3 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Monster from this card; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster from either player's Graveyard. The Special Summoned monster's effects are negated. If this card attacks a Zombie-Type monster: Increase this card's ATK by 1000, until the end of the Damage Step. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamwestslapdog Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 I applaud the fact that you actually use an image that looks somewhat similar to something konami would actually use. I guess it would... Kinda give zombies a boost? I don't know of any level three the deck plays other than spirit reaper, or if you're running the plant engine, Dandy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted March 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 I applaud the fact that you actually use an image that looks somewhat similar to something konami would actually use. I guess it would... Kinda give zombies a boost? I don't know of any level three the deck plays other than spirit reaper, or if you're running the plant engine, Dandy. I thought the same thing after making it...but Tour Guide should make up for it...I think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 @above TGU is a card you know, lol. As for the card itself, I feel like it needs some sort of minor restriction to prevent this thing from spurring up OTKs. For example, if Konami ever makes a really big (and playable, lol) zombie monster, then you could TGU -> grab that monster, and wack him with a big beater and a 2k monster. What I'd recommend is to have a "This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect". Then it's fairly balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted March 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 @above TGU is a card you know, lol. As for the card itself, I feel like it needs some sort of minor restriction to prevent this thing from spurring up OTKs. For example, if Konami ever makes a really big (and playable, lol) zombie monster, then you could TGU -> grab that monster, and wack him with a big beater and a 2k monster. What I'd recommend is to have a "This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect". Then it's fairly balanced. Sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleaknight Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 The artwork is indeed very much suiting and overall great, where did you get that from? Link? Also, this could be SO deadly with Zombie World, it'd be probably overpowered. It's like a once-per-turn Monster Reborn. Also, about the second effect, if you negate the card's effects, its effect that makes its ATK 3000 will be negated as well, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted March 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 The artwork is indeed very much suiting and overall great, where did you get that from? Link? Also, this could be SO deadly with Zombie World, it'd be probably overpowered. It's like a once-per-turn Monster Reborn. Also, about the second effect, if you negate the card's effects, its effect that makes its ATK 3000 will be negated as well, lol. Is there a way to achieve what I want then? Will add another restriction. EDIT: Honestly, I've had this picture on my computer for a super long time and I have no idea where it came from, lol. Double EDIT: 3 Level 3s? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 3 level 3s kills it. You'd rather stick with 2 and tweak the wording a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleaknight Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 Is there a way to achieve what I want then? Will add another restriction. Probably like this: "You can detach 3 Xyz Materials from this card; its original ATK becomes 3000, but it cannot activate its effects." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted March 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 Alright, I have added an Earthbound Immortal-like clause to his effect. Now you are completely dependent on Zombie World(or I guess any other Field Spell you might be running...), which is easily taken out by MST or Heavy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted March 22, 2013 Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 [quote name="~Renegade~" post="6166218" timestamp="1363922977"]Alright, I have added an Earthbound Immortal-like clause to his effect. Now you are completely dependent on Zombie World(or I guess any other Field Spell you might be running...), which is easily taken out by MST or Heavy.[/quote] But now it's bad because Zombie world is bad. :( If you really wanted to outright balance it you could say "level 4 or lower zombie". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleaknight Posted March 22, 2013 Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 Also, the last (new) effect must have no colon since it is continuous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted March 22, 2013 Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 2 level 3's for a 3k beater would normally be too Op'd, but I think the field spell thing balances it. It also removes the playability somewhat. The whole zombie orientated-ness of it is nice, but the general design seems a little jarring and unfocused. The majority of the time, this will act as a 2k rank 3 with a zombie grabbing effect. I don't think the 3k option and opponent-zombie- material thing does much for it. Could you not simplify it a little and give it more usability wholesale? The art and template are very nice, btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted March 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2013 Alright, changed it up... a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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