Barian Warlord Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Hey Mercy I finished my app on page 9, sorry for taking so long I've had some family stuff that's made it a little hard to think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirlex Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 NOOOO! I gotta create my elf character Tommorow!!! D: Feredir Wait for meeeeeeeeeee! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Sorry Tamara and Scyllia are kind of pathetic in terms of app... by the time I started them I was running of gas :/ [spoiler='Tamara Von Mira'] Username: Sapphyre Name: Tamara Von Mira Gender: Female Race: Vampire Age: 20 [spoiler='Appearance'] Tamara is the one in pink, and the sleeves are only to their wrists.[/spoiler] Bio: Tamara is one of the twin fil de bas of Elnear Von Mira when he raped a servant at the Nuevedia Castle. They were born almost at the exact same time of their father’s death, and almost immediately abandoned by their mother who viewed them as a painful reminder of her time at the castle. Soon after they were found by Niasa Von Mira, who toke the children in as her own, despite the fact that they were born out of rage and hate, vowing to show them only love. The first two years of the twin’s lives was spent traveling and building a new home, and have basically spent their whole lives at the Scarlet Legacy Mansion. Due to this the twins have little knowledge of the customs of Nuevedia. Tamara immediately toke a liking to Regina being that they are like birds of a feather in terms of personality and interests, and spent a huge amount of time with her in the library. Tamara and Regina would spend long hours in the library, sometimes not even talking to each other so engrossed in the book they were reading. Due to this Tamara developed a very close relationship with Regina who became like a second mother to her. Worried about her mother when the mist descended Tamara and her sister went in a carriage, driven by Haruna, to meet their father seeking his help. Personality: Tamara is the technically older child of the twins and acts as such. She is extremely protective of her sister, and more responsible keeping the two girls out of trouble (for the most part). Like her element Tamara is cold and icy, and leaves the mansion very little having no problem with her mother’s rule to stay inside, and away from the outside world. Her attitude is generally aggressive towards people outside of the mansion’s staff, or her family. A generally quite person she does not enjoy the company of others, and has the tendency to be quite morbid. Tamara is very mature, and wishes to have no part in Scyllia’s shenanigans, and actually will insult her sister about how her schemes always fail, and is an extremely pessimistic person almost always taking a bland monotone. All in all Tamara’s personality is generally bland, and really might as well not be present at all, but despite the stark differences in there personalities (literally being polar opposites) both girls get along relatively well. Inside Scarlet Legacy Mansion Tamara spends most of her time in the library, and such is very intelligent, and while she acknowledges that she has absorbed a lot of facts from the library, she says she is only intelligent, because she applies those facts correctly and precisely. Unlike her mother Tamara is learned scientist, which happens to be her mother’s weak point, and is very interested how science and magic blend. Tamara is responsible for the creation of most of the mansion’s defenses and her father’s muskets. Faction: Neutral Abilities/Equipment: Ice Magic: Being of royal blood she is able to use magic, but since she is not a pure-blood Von Mira she does not have access to the energy magic of her mother. Due to the fact that her tutor is a heavy magic use Tamara and her sister are very talented at using magic in combat, and in fact is basically her only method of defense should she be forced to fight. Tamara uses ice “spikes” to fight, firing them at her opponent. She also creates structures of ice to alter the battlefield in her favor. Tamara and her sister have developed their magic to complement each other and always fight as a pair. Senbon: Tamara uses senbon as her main form of weaponry should she be forced to fight. Under her sleeves she keeps an inro full of them, the inro is decorated to look like common purse to avoid suspicion.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Scyllia Von Mira'] Username: Sapphyre Name: Scyllia Von Mira Gender: Female Race: Vampire Age: 20 [spoiler='Appearance'] Well Scyllia's the one is yellow obviously, her sleeves also only travel down to her wrists as well. Also she is not wearing a dress, but pants similar to those worn by Jasmine in Aladdin.[/spoiler] Bio: Scyllia is one of the twin fil de bas of Elnear Von Mira when he raped a servant at the Nuevedia Castle. They were born almost at the exact same time of their father’s death, and almost immediately abandoned by their mother who viewed them as a painful reminder of her time at the castle. Soon after they were found by Niasa Von Mira, who toke the children in as her own, despite the fact that they were born out of rage and hate, vowing to show them only love. The first two years of the twin’s lives was spent traveling and building a new home, and have basically spent their whole lives at the Scarlet Legacy Mansion. Due to this the twins have little knowledge of the customs of Nuevedia. Scyllia was much more outgoing than her sister cherished the months whenever her father visited spending every minute she could with him. Scyllia would often break her mother’s rule to stay inside the mansion, with her father’s help, and go out and mingle with the citizens of Noirlune. Due to this Scyllia developed very good social skills. Worried about her mother when the mist descended Scyllia and her sister went in a carriage, driven by Haruna, to meet their father seeking his help. Personality: Scyllia is the technically younger of the two twins, and acts as such. Scyllia is childish and playful, though she sometimes takes it to the point of naiveté, which annoys her sister to the last degree. Scyllia has the tendency to be condescending to others, and can insult them without knowing it even though doesn’t mean harm, but is instead trying to be a jokster. Scyllia takes after her father most being carefree and of good humour She is quite bright, and always sees the good side of things, and can find positivity in event he darkest of situations. A stark contrast to her sister’s personality Scyllia’s personality is vibrant and intricate, she is filled with life, and wants to enjoy all everything to its fullest, a party girl through and through. Despite being the yin to her sister’s yang Scyllia and Tamara get along relatively well. She shares her uncle’s love of stories, and is talented writer currently writing her own book. Scyllia is also a talented artist, loving architecture the most, and has designed many add-ons to the main mansion. While her sister is the one who drafts the designs for the defenses of the Scarlet Legacy Mansion it Scyllia who often builds the contraptions. Faction: Neutral Abilities/Equipment: Lightening Magic: Being as Scyllia is not of pure Von Mira blood she cannot wield the energy magic her mother can, but since she does have royal blood she can use magic. Since her tutor is a heavily magic reliant Tamara and Scyllia have been taught magic extensively, and specialists in their respective forms of magic. Scyllia forms “serpents” of electricity that she uses to fight for her like puppets. She uses lightening grenades as well, which she forms a ball of electricity that upon impact with a physical object will explode sending bolts of electricity in random directions. Scyllia and her sister have developed their magic to complement each other and always fight as a pair. Senbon: Scyllia uses senbon as her main form of weaponry should she be forced to fight. Under her sleeves she keeps an inro full of them, the inro is decorated to look like common purse to avoid suspicion. [/spoiler] One the other hand I quite like how Aro turned out: [spoiler='Aro Volterriar'] Username: Sapphyre Name: Aro VolterriarGender: MaleRace: VampireAge: 39 [spoiler='Appearance'][/spoiler]Bio: Aro was born to a relatively normal vampire family, which albeit large, was very close nit. Nothing particular stood out about them being a lower middle class family he was trained as a farm boy by his father, but always aspired to serve as part of the Royal Nuevedian Honour guard. When he came to his parents about this they disapproved saying that he must take over the farm for them when he grew older. Unfortunately Aro would be able to join the royal guard, but the price was a tragic turn of events. On his 12th birthday his parents’ house and farm burned to the ground, with them in it. Fortunately for Aro he had been gathering supplies from the market, but returned to find his parents dead. Since there was no cause for the fire, and it had happened on his birthday Aro’s relatives viewed him as a cursed demon child, and threw him out on to the streets. The one person who accepted was Commander Ptolemy, who took him in when nobody else would. For this Aro was especially grateful and developed a father-son relationship with his commander. From then on Aro was trained by Commander Ptolemy to be a royal guard, and thanks to his private training was one of the best guards when he entered the ranks officially at 18. Being around the castle a lot he knew the royal family, but out of all them the daughter, Niasa, caught his eye. He thought she was beautiful, but unlike many other men did not want her for he looks (well he did at first, but he doesn’t like to admit it), but for her kindness. Although until the Battle of Nuevedia he remained largely unnoticed from her eye. During the Battle of Nuevedia he took care of the princess when she was struck by both an archer’s arrow, and stabbed by her uncle Lyon, though he remained largely out of the battle, as he was stuffed in a storage closet by Niasa for his own safety. After the mystical tree Elnherjar crushed the library, and subsequently released him from storage room, he found the dying princess who sent him to find Azami Yamada to heal her. The latter tried to deny that she could do anything for the princess, but a watchful Aro shot her revealing her true appearance, and from that has had a particular distrust and aversion towards the woman. After the battle though heartache struck again for Aro finding his commander dying. For weeks afterword he sank into a depression, and it was only Niasa that eventually pulled him out. On the day of her brother’s coronation Niasa and Aro left Nuevedia in search of a new home with adopted daughters, Tamara and Scyllia, finding an area outside Noirlune to satisfactory. Most of the building was done by Niasa due to the fact that Aro returned to the castle shortly afterward to fulfill his duties as royal guard captain (he is currently the youngest vampire to be, officially, made commander of the Nuvedia Royal Guard. Aro spends alternating months at the castle in Nuevedia serving as Royal Guard Commander and at Scarlet Legacy Mansion. He is currently traveling with Alsa to accompany him on the hunting trip.Personality: Aro is generally positive and up-beat preferring to look at the glass half full instead of half empty, a positive contrast to his wife’s worrying and, at times, pessimistic attitude. Relatively light-hearted he takes things, including insults, in good stride with humour. He is extremely loyal to his superior’s, and will put his life on the line for them should the situation call for it. Although he is not hyper intelligent like his wife or daughters, Aro has a good head on his shoulders and can make the right call in a tight situation. Aro has a good work ethic, and when he gets started on a project will not quit until it’s finished. A competent military commander he functions well under pressure, and will never drive those under his command to achieve impossible goals. Faction: NeutralAbilities/Equipment: Hand of the Princess: Aro uses a twin pair of musket-like design, made special by his daughter Tamara, which fire yellow energy rounds in a five round clip. Due to being ambidextrous he can wield both at the same time. Both muskets are kept on his shoulder with a brown shoulder strap, and keeps a small pack of about 20 clips in a pouch on his left thigh. Royal Guard sword: As the captain of the royal guard he keeps a sword on him at all times, which is strapped to left hip. It is used for close range combat, but remains relatively unused, because Aro prefers ballistic weapons. Military-grade pistol: Aro keeps a semi-automatic pistol strapped to his right thigh for minor enemies who can be dropped easily. Royal Honour Guard Knife: Aro keeps this knife for purely ceremonial purposes as a reminder of his former commander, Ptolemy. [/spoiler] Anyway let me know if anything's wrong with them Merciful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Am I wrong to assume that I am the mercenary that has been hired. I don't mean to sound presumptuous, I just want to make sure before I screw anything up. EDIT: And if it is me, do I directly meet the doctor or wait with everyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Well, Beginning. I have to say I'm impressed, wasn't expecting it to be that short~ That almost reads insincere. Are you saying it should be longer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted April 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 All accepted :D loving Aro~ Am I wrong to assume that I am the mercenary that has been hired. I don't mean to sound presumptuous, I just want to make sure before I screw anything up. EDIT: And if it is me, do I directly meet the doctor or wait with everyone else? Relax. You are the mercenery. And just meet up with everyone else. @Gale: I knew something was wrong. Thanks for pointing it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Think there is a typo in the spire segment. The bolder time is off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 And I'm starting my first post with a bang. ... I could always make the meteor miss, though :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 O.O Me..me...meteor...? Well that escala.... damn, that joke's already been done >.> So I miss 5 pages of OOC posts >.> but at least that only seems to account for about 7 IC posts xD Onto the probably wall of text of a first post. I'll try to restrain myself though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 I think I wanna cut the meteor into pieces...yeah lets go with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 I'm confused as to whether Alexandria and Nil are actually different people. Are they? Because it seems that way. And yet, it also seems as if they are both merely two different personalities of the same body; stuff like the fact that there is only one app, and that Nil isn't actually mentioned in the post >.> I'm posting as if they are different people for now; tell me if I'm wrong and I'll correct it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 I'm confused as to whether Alexandria and Nil are actually different people. Are they? Because it seems that way. And yet, it also seems as if they are both merely two different personalities of the same body; stuff like the fact that there is only one app, and that Nil isn't actually mentioned in the post >.> I'm posting as if they are different people for now; tell me if I'm wrong and I'll correct it. I can answer that one....the answer is yes on both accounts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 >.> Well that's...different. Ah well, all I needed to know was if there were two different bodies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted April 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Oh, they only have one body? That explains a lot. ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirlex Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 [Spoiler= Noldor (Elf)] Username: TheAragornName: NoldorGender: MaleRace: ElfAge: 110 Years old[Spoiler=Human Appearance] This is his Human Disguise [/spoiler] Appearance: As an elf he has long black hair reaching below his shoulders. His face very fair along with black eyes matching his pure black hair.His ears would also obviously stand out. Basically He looks like Legolas except with black hair and eyes. Bio: A small elf colonization of a family survived the years when elves used to be common they lived in a nice island hidden away from other humans and vampires,but they were in trouble. This was the era when the Vampires and Humans were at war. In this island with a elven treehouse lived an elf called Noldor descended from wood elves. He lived there in peace until he was in appearance to a 12 year old boy. A wandering vampire who strayed away from the battle were starving and on the island as a deserter camp,eventually he found the treehouse and attempted to attack his father and mother....he succeeded due to his father being maimed years ago in the arm,unfortunatly his bow holding arm. The mother was also killed while she tried to protect Noldor's father. The vampire took little reluctance along Noldor and charged at him,Noldor ran towards the chest where his father kept his old bow made out of Rowan Wood,he took an arrow and aimed it at the vampire,as he shot the arrow it flew through the air striking the vampire in the forehead. The vampire dropped dead whilst Noldor dropped weeping. Later on he fastened himself with ranger elven clothes and his father's bow and Mithril Chain shirt. Later on when he was in the appearance of any adult elf,he bought the mithril enforced steel sword from a merchant disguised as a human. Evantually he lived on to be 110 years old. Currently he longs for someone like him,an elf....a mentor.Personality: Noldor is kind and calm but perfers to never speak about his past due to it being a grim grim story. He usually perfers to wander alone and have little interaction with vampires or humans knowing that immediately he would be hunted down. He is also very energitic in a firm manner but also very bashful at times.Faction: NeutralAbilities/Equipment: He possess a rare chainmail shirt out of mithril which he wears under his elven ranger clothes to protect him.Along his back is slung a bow made out of Rowan wood and a quiver filled with arrows for long range combat. Unusually he is also skilled in close combat due to being in tough situations he is the best at melee with a nice medium sized sword, his sword of course would be the same size and made out of a sharp Steel blade smithed with a bit at mithril at the edge but not much.He also carries a pack of throwing knives that he uses for throwing and normal knife duties,they are made out of iron. Healing Magic: Noldor has learned healing magic from his father when he was young,but not very much only enough to heal sword slashes and arrow shots that are only an inch deep in flesh. Disguising Magic: He learned this from his father in emergency,he usually disguises himself as a Human or Vampire. He can disguise into any thing that exists,but it has limits. He can not transform into fire breathing dragons or werewolves for example.But this covers any magical notice or scent of him being an elf and changes it to the race indicated he turned into. [/spoiler] My app is done!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 I can answer that one....the answer is yes on both accounts One body... well uhhh... I'm not exactly sure how to respond to that one. Its certainly interesting. On another note Merciful do you mind if I edit Niasa's app and add the shadow avatar in... I kind of forgot about it ^^" EDIT: Aragorn just read DWG's post -.- Also you shouldn't post in the IC thread until you get accepted, or a mod might lock us. Merciful will see your OOC post as soon as he gets back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Nono hes a demon that's possessed her since she was inside her mother. He can manifest him self but mostly its in battle, as long as hes just that I'll refrain from making him a app, but when I decide to make him more important I'll make one, then possibly tie up those loos ends in Alexandria's story I purposely left out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 OK, think someone can help me out real quick? Kinda confused on how I should do my next post ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 >.> Aragorn, you're seriously starting to annoy me now. God knows what Merciful feels like, considering this is his big project thing. Dont post IC until you're accepted. And if I can read up about 10 pages on some RPs, just to catch up, you can most certainly read a single page. Welcome to RPing, get used to it, like the rest of us probably have. Oh, and if you want to talk to me alone, rather than to a general thing, then PM me. That's what it's there for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Da you went about it perfectly, and sonic, maybe meet with Wylfred? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Well, he seemed to be in the middle of meeting with someone at the moment...wouldn't want to interrupt Wylfred like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Oh, and since you clarified more on the whole demon thing Kneesocks, do you want me to edit my post so that Feredir is unaware of Nil? Or is Nil someone who people know of? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Your a close friend I'm sure you would know at least a bit. no need to over exert your post. I quite liked the way you did it, it was promiscuous and showed some lack of knowing. its perfect ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirlex Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 :P xD I know I rped before Im just really bored and haven't rped in like 2-3 years Thought is my chara being an apprentice of Feredir still up for grabs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 >.> It depends on how the RP progresses. And depends on you being accepted first. And, to be honest, there's quite a bit of grammar that needs touching up in the app. And by a bit, I mean a lot. So I'd say you'd best improve upon your writing first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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