ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 What do yu mean, covered with? and sorry about the grammar errors, this keybord is trash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 cards : Monsters : Spells : Traps: Xyz : (Corrected) Effect : 3 Level 3 'Chain' Monsters This card cannot attack. Once per turn, you can Detach 1 xyz material from this card, During this turn, this card can attack, and when it's attack is sucsessful, and the monster you detached was a 'Chain' monster you can choose 1 monster your opponent controls, and paralyze it. When 2 or more monsters your opponent contols are paralyzed, you can pay 700 life points, attach them all to this card, and your opponent loses life points equal to the monsters attached by this effect x200. Can't seem to put it in a spoiler. The bind effect will be explained in more details if needed. Corrections for some cards : Chainsaw's effect : No discard cost Chain Shackles : When this card is summoned while you control another 'Chain' monster, you can equip it to a card your opponent controls as an Equip Spell Card (including spell & trap cards), then give control of this card to your opponent. While equipped with this effect, that card is paralyzed." Releasing chains of heaven's eff may be changed. Abaddons effect makes him gain attack of all paralyzed/bound cards, not just monsters. And he must detach 2 xyz materials. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sk00ps Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Name: Luthux Metill Gender: M Age: 15 Appearance: Luthux is a tall, slender man. Blond hair. Usually wears sneakers and a jacket. Has glasses with chains hooked up to them. Most of the time he wears contacts but only outside of duels. Quite pale. Personality: Luthux is kind and caring to people he can trust and is VERY hostile to those he doesn't trust or those that have hurt him. He is very intelligent in astronomy and wishes to become and astronomer. He believes in his friends and is a very serious person in duels. He puts other people before himself and will defend his friends from any harm. Faction: Duelist Bio: At the age of 6 Luthux received his first card, Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Overwhelmed with joy he wished to have 2 more. Sadly the only other copies were owned by Seto Kaiba. At the age of 15, his family's house burned down with the family inside. Luthux was at a friend's house at the time. When he came back there was a box sitting in front of the remains of his home. It contained a deck. This deck contained Metallic counterparts of already existing cards and Machine-Types with a second type. He decided to use this deck to hunt down and destroy the Numbers as he convicted one of his family's death. He never liked the Duel Runners and thus refuses to duel on one, but will use one for transportation. Theme Song: None Deck: "Metallic" Machine Based counterparts designed to upgrade existing cards through the use of Metalmorph/Rare Metalmorph and banishing and sending then back to the respective areas. and Dual Machine types "Mech Blades". He owns 1 Number monster. His ace card is his Dark Synchro Metallic Dark Dragon, and his Metallic Beasts (Metallic versions of the God Cards), but refuses to use the Beasts with a duel disk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Name: Luthux Metill Gender: M Age: 15 Appearance: Luthux is a tall, slender man. Blond hair. Usually wears sneakers and a jacket. Has glasses with chains hooked up to them. Most of the time he wears contacts but only outside of duels. Quite pale. Personality: Luthux is kind and caring to people he can trust and is VERY hostile to those he doesn't trust or those that have hurt him. He is very intelligent in astronomy and wishes to become and astronomer. He believes in his friends and is a very serious person in duels. He puts other people before himself and will defend his friends from any harm. Faction: Duelist Bio: At the age of 6 Luthux received his first card, Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Overwhelmed with joy he wished to have 2 more. Sadly the only other copies were owned by Seto Kaiba. At the age of 15, his family's house burned down with the family inside. Luthux was at a friend's house at the time. When he came back there was a box sitting in front of the remains of his home. It contained a deck. This deck contained Metallic counterparts of already existing cards and Machine-Types with a second type. He decided to use this deck to hunt down and destroy the Numbers as he convicted one of his family's death. He never liked the Duel Runners and thus refuses to duel on one, but will use one for transportation. Theme Song: None Deck: "Metallic" Machine Based counterparts designed to upgrade existing cards through the use of Metalmorph/Rare Metalmorph and banishing and sending then back to the respective areas. and Dual Machine types "Mech Blades". He owns 1 Number monster. His ace card is his Dark Synchro Metallic Dark Dragon, and his Metallic Beasts (Metallic versions of the God Cards), but refuses to use the Beasts with a duel disk. ...That's not how you make an application. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted March 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 What do yu mean, covered with? and sorry about the grammar errors, this keybord is trash. Like your app says he's hidden from head to toe, so I was wondering what covers him from head to toe.   Name: Luthux Metill Gender: M Age: 15 Appearance: Luthux is a tall, slender man. Blond hair. Usually wears sneakers and a jacket. Has glasses with chains hooked up to them. Most of the time he wears contacts but only outside of duels. Quite pale. Personality: Luthux is kind and caring to people he can trust and is VERY hostile to those he doesn't trust or those that have hurt him. He is very intelligent in astronomy and wishes to become and astronomer. He believes in his friends and is a very serious person in duels. He puts other people before himself and will defend his friends from any harm. Faction: Duelist Bio: At the age of 6 Luthux received his first card, Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Overwhelmed with joy he wished to have 2 more. Sadly the only other copies were owned by Seto Kaiba. At the age of 15, his family's house burned down with the family inside. Luthux was at a friend's house at the time. When he came back there was a box sitting in front of the remains of his home. It contained a deck. This deck contained Metallic counterparts of already existing cards and Machine-Types with a second type. He decided to use this deck to hunt down and destroy the Numbers as he convicted one of his family's death. He never liked the Duel Runners and thus refuses to duel on one, but will use one for transportation. Theme Song: None Deck: "Metallic" Machine Based counterparts designed to upgrade existing cards through the use of Metalmorph/Rare Metalmorph and banishing and sending then back to the respective areas. and Dual Machine types "Mech Blades". He owns 1 Number monster. His ace card is his Dark Synchro Metallic Dark Dragon, and his Metallic Beasts (Metallic versions of the God Cards), but refuses to use the Beasts with a duel disk. Please format the app right, because I'm not going to try and distuigsh what's what in the wall of text. Also looking at the last line of your app, no God Cards, in any form. Also your aware that your necro-bumping those other topics you made apps in right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sk00ps Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Like your app says he's hidden from head to toe, so I was wondering what covers him from head to toe. Please format the app right, because I'm not going to try and distuigsh what's what in the wall of text. Also looking at the last line of your app, no God Cards, in any form. Also your aware that your necro-bumping those other topics you made apps in right?I am now aware of that thanks (note to self no god cards) "The true villain here is not our darkness, but our light" Name: Luthux Kaiba Gender: M Age: 15 Appearance: Luthux is a tall, slender man. Blond hair. Usually wears sneakers and a jacket. Has glasses with chains hooked up to them. Most of the time he wears contacts but only outside of duels. Quite pale. Wears shorts or pants depending on the season. He always wears a long sleeve shirt and never a no-sleeve. His hair most of the time gets in to his eyes. His hair is long even for him and he is 5ft 8in. He always wears his Duel Disk on his right arm. Personality: Luthux is kind and caring to people he can trust and is VERY hostile to those he doesn't trust or those that have hurt him. He is very intelligent in astronomy and wishes to become and astronomer. He believes in his friends and is a very serious person in duels. He puts other people before himself and will defend his friends from any harm. He disliked anyone who uses the cards as weapons or for nefarious purposes. Once he is set on an objective he won't stop trying to complete that. He has no sympathy for any Neo-Arcadian wishes to see them gone. When it comes to dueling he's very strategic, always finding ways to win. This is also his downfall sometimes Faction: Duelist Bio: At the age of 6 Luthux received his first card, Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Overwhelmed with joy he wished to have 2 more. So his father gave him 2 more courtesy of Seto and Luthux's father's relatives passing the cards down. At the age of 15, his family's house burned down with the family inside. Luthux was at a friend's house at the time. When he came back there was a box sitting in front of the remains of his home. It contained a deck. This deck contained Metallic counterparts of already existing cards and Machine-Types with a second type. He decided to use this deck to hunt down and destroy Neo-Arcadia as he convicted them of his family's death. He never liked the Duel Runners and thus refuses to duel on one, but will use one for transportation. He is the great x4 grandson of Seto Kaiba but doesn't take on Seto's personality. He very skilled with machines and thus his interest in his deck. After his family's death he was sent to an orphanage were he dueled other orphans to improve his skill. Theme Song: In The End - Linkan Park Deck: "Metallic" Machine Based counterparts designed to upgrade existing cards through the use of Metalmorph/Rare Metalmorph and banishing and sending then back to the respective areas. and Dual Machine types "Mech Blades". His ace card is his Dark Synchro Metallic Dark Dragon. Link to Metallics: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/298417-metallic-madness-12/ Link to Mech Blades: http://s1136.beta.photobucket.com/?src=wap This should fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 I meant that his clothe's are hiding his every organ but an eye, hair, and a few fingers, not a real cover, btw are my cards aight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted March 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 I meant that his clothe's are hiding his every organ but an eye, hair, and a few fingers, not a real cover. Okay. Then your accepted.   I am now aware of that thanks (note to self no god cards) Name: Luthux Metill  Gender: M  Age: 15  Appearance: Luthux is a tall, slender man. Blond hair. Usually wears sneakers and a jacket. Has glasses with chains hooked up to them. Most of the time he wears contacts but only outside of duels. Quite pale.  Personality: Luthux is kind and caring to people he can trust and is VERY hostile to those he doesn't trust or those that have hurt him. He is very intelligent in astronomy and wishes to become and astronomer. He believes in his friends and is a very serious person in duels. He puts other people before himself and will defend his friends from any harm.  Faction: Duelist  Bio: At the age of 6 Luthux received his first card, Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Overwhelmed with joy he wished to have 2 more. Sadly the only other copies were owned by Seto Kaiba. At the age of 15, his family's house burned down with the family inside. Luthux was at a friend's house at the time. When he came back there was a box sitting in front of the remains of his home. It contained a deck. This deck contained Metallic counterparts of already existing cards and Machine-Types with a second type. He decided to use this deck to hunt down and destroy the Numbers as he convicted one of his family's death. He never liked the Duel Runners and thus refuses to duel on one, but will use one for transportation.  Theme Song: None  Deck: "Metallic" Machine Based counterparts designed to upgrade existing cards through the use of Metalmorph/Rare Metalmorph and banishing and sending then back to the respective areas. and Dual Machine types "Mech Blades". He owns 1 Number monster. His ace card is his Dark Synchro Metallic Dark Dragon. This should fix it. I've said before no Numbers, and your personality, appearance, and Bio are too short. Also you'll need to post your customs. You have some flaws in your app, such as Seto Kaiba is long dead by the time this RP takes place (even Mokuba is long dead), so if a Kaiba is going to be a part of your app, then it'll have to some other relative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Just wondering, How more ppl need to complete their apps b4 we start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Wait. No Numbers? But #34 is crucial to my character's deck... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 wat you playing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueZero Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Wait. No Numbers? But #34 is crucial to my character's deck... Â Â You can always come up with something similar with Number #34 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 wat you playing? Crashbugs. Â You can always come up with something similar with Number #34 :D Maybe...Or simply go the route of having a Terror-Byte that isn't a Number, and is just "Electronic Computer Beast Terror-Byte". Is that OK, Sapphyre? A De-Numbered Terror-Byte? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 oh camon wai can't this like, role playinginging start or leik watever! (i dun really sound or talk or write like that rly) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 oh camon wai can't this like, role playinginging start or leik watever! (i dun really sound or talk or write like that rly) I hope not, because you really need to work on your grammar and punctuation if anyone is going to take you seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 i was doing an impression of a stereotypical teen girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 i was doing an impression of a stereotypical teen girl. Seriously, use proper grammar and punctuation. Text is the only thing you can use on this forum to identify yourself. If you can come off as someone who can type correctly, then it makes you look smarter than someone who cannot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Fine, but SRSLY, is this rp ever going to start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Fine, but SERIOUSLY, is this RP ever going to start? Fixed. And soon. A few people, such as myself, need to get their applications in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Well i think some people that reserved are not going to make their apps, so, did you start alredy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Well I think some people that reserved are not going to make their apps, so did you start already? Fixed. And I did. Twice. I have a bad habit of my computer hating it when I make apps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Wow, my computer has that too, once i had to remake an app 6 TIMES before my computer surrendered. Eversince whenever I fill an application, I copy everytime I finish a paragraph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Wow, my computer has that too, once I had to remake an app 6 TIMES before my computer surrendered. Ever since, whenever I fill out an application, I copy everytime I finish a paragraph. Fixed. You're learning. My computer has the bad habit of going back a page every now and then when I hit backspace. That's how I lost the first app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChainsofHell Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 Copy EVERYTIME you have to press backspace, or just mark it with the mouse, right-click and press cut. And there you go. With this, you'll finish your app in no time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sk00ps Posted March 16, 2013 Report Share Posted March 16, 2013 [quote name="Sapphyre" post="6162581" timestamp="1363446270"] Like your app says he's hidden from head to toe, so I was wondering what covers him from head to toe. Please format the app right, because I'm not going to try and distuigsh what's what in the wall of text. Also looking at the last line of your app, no God Cards, in any form. Also your aware that your necro-bumping those other topics you made apps in right?[/quote]I am now aware of that thanks (note to self no god cards) Name: Luthux Kaiba Gender: M Age: 15 Appearance: Luthux is a tall, slender man. Blond hair. Usually wears sneakers and a jacket. Has glasses with chains hooked up to them. Most of the time he wears contacts but only outside of duels. Quite pale. Wears shorts or pants depending on the season. He always wears a long sleeve shirt and never a no-sleeve. His hair most of the time gets in to his eyes. His hair is long even for him and he is 5ft 8in. He always wears his Duel Disk on his right arm. Personality: Luthux is kind and caring to people he can trust and is VERY hostile to those he doesn't trust or those that have hurt him. He is very intelligent in astronomy and wishes to become and astronomer. He believes in his friends and is a very serious person in duels. He puts other people before himself and will defend his friends from any harm. He disliked anyone who uses the cards as weapons or for nefarious purposes. Once he is set on an objective he won't stop trying to complete that. He has no sympathy for any Neo-Arcadian wishes to see them gone. When it comes to dueling he's very strategic, always finding ways to win. This is also his downfall sometimes Faction: Duelist Bio: At the age of 6 Luthux received his first card, Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Overwhelmed with joy he wished to have 2 more. So his father gave him 2 more courtesy of Seto and Luthux's father's relatives passing the cards down. At the age of 15, his family's house burned down with the family inside. Luthux was at a friend's house at the time. When he came back there was a box sitting in front of the remains of his home. It contained a deck. This deck contained Metallic counterparts of already existing cards and Machine-Types with a second type. He decided to use this deck to hunt down and destroy Neo-Arcadia as he convicted them of his family's death. He never liked the Duel Runners and thus refuses to duel on one, but will use one for transportation. He is the great x4 grandson of Seto Kaiba but doesn't take on Seto's personality. He very skilled with machines and thus his interest in his deck. After his family's death he was sent to an orphanage were he dueled other orphans to improve his skill. Theme Song: In The End - Linkan Park Deck: "Metallic" Machine Based counterparts designed to upgrade existing cards through the use of Metalmorph/Rare Metalmorph and banishing and sending then back to the respective areas. and Dual Machine types "Mech Blades". His ace card is his Dark Synchro Metallic Dark Dragon. Link to Metallics: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/298417-metallic-madness-12/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/298417-metallic-madness-12/[/url] Link to Mech Blades: [url="http://s1136.beta.photobucket.com/?src=wap"]http://s1136.beta.photobucket.com/?src=wap[/url] This should fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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