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When did all this happen?

 

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In any case we need to get our guys out of that place first.  Even if it is to set up camp somewhere else so our doc can administer some first aid.  I'd post something, but it seems kinda pointless until we clear the building.

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I'm just going to edit my post with Vana escaping, because it would be pointless to just make another stupidly short post. 

 

[quote]~Vana: Too young, unsettled mind, too child-like. It's amazing that she's on the team, though her powers are useful.[/quote]

;~; 

 

Also Daena of course, I mean she was picked Number 1 for a reason right? She could save us all from certain doom at the end of this mission, so that everyone is like "Yeah! Daena we love you, be our leader!" 

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We never elected a leader to begin with, our characters really dont know each other that well. So far it seems the leader is whoever is willing to give orders. Though Daena is the one who took down the Thersite, so shes got that going for her.

 

Also I am giving my character a mic stand to finally make up for the pipe that is still embedded into the flesh of that Skulvern. (imusingly enough in it's skull as well). It fits since shes a rocker and she can use the mic to increase the volume of her shouts, which in turn increases how powerful they are. It's a simple weapon but her powers are a bit cheap to begin with so a lackluster weapon is fine.

 

 

Not entirely sure exactly how her spooky talk works yet, it seems to be done quitely but its one of these weird things where no matter how soft it is you can hear it clearly, like a loud whisper. It also seems somewhat plot relevant with Vana but idk I will figure that out once we have a lull in action... which is actually really soon since we are at the end of this mission.

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"Here we stand in mutual admiration."
 
Personal Information
Username: Tormented
Name: Alexandria
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: 29-December
Blood Type: A
Nanite Type: R-Gen
Hobby(s): Drawing, it is away she can resolve her anger. She also loves hunting-it allows her to practice her accuracy without the worry of needlessly putting herself in danger.
Appearance:[spoiler=Alexandrias Appereance']sample_6babca90bd0bb2cc005a8a23ed84e35ce

 

Most things are the same other than the fact that she has blue eyes in the picture rather than the brown ones. She also rarely smiles and the reddish overcoat is usually replaced with a black trench coat. [/spoiler]
Personality: She is as cold and as ruthless as the winter nights, she feels no suffering and loves the sight of death, her blood is said to be made of pure ice. She does not love as loving makes a person weak she only hates, hates those who are weak and hates those who are unready for violence. Her only solitude is death and loves to create a form of terror in people's hearts. The only thing that could ever possibly allow her to become weak like others is by the sight of her family, however that is less than likely to occur due to unknown reasons.
 
Combat Information
Weapon Type: Long Range.
Primary Weapon(s):  Sniper Rifle

Fighting Style: Long Range unless her opponents are nearby in this case she either uses her dual wield pistols or a combat knife.
Secondary Weapon(s)/Equipment:[Spoiler='Secondary Weapons and Other Equipment]Dual Wield Silver Ballers They usually come equipped with silencers so her position is not revealed as often. 

Combat Knife: Finger holes are in place of the metallic diamonds so the grip is strong rather than it slipping out her hands.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Special Technique(s):'] Quick Draw: She is able to quickly reload and aim as fast as she can reload. This allows her to take down multiple targets at once.

 

Target Acquired: Increases  her ranged accuracy by roughly 30% and the amount of armor she can penetrate by 15% for 10 seconds.

 

Shatter Shot: Fires a high-impact shot that deals an increased amount of damage and reduces the target's armor by 20% for 45 seconds. Additionally inflicts trauma for a few seconds, reducing all healing the target receives by 20%.[/spoiler]

 

[Spoiler='Power(s):'] Weakening Blast: She empowers her bullets and causes extra weapon damage and the target also takes 30% additional damage from her next attacks. Lasts 15 seconds

 

Ambush: Fires an empowered shot that deals an extra amount of weapon damage. Must be in cover to use. [/spoiler]

 
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If that position was open, you really should've made it notable, so that other's might apply for such a position. In the sake of fairness.

 

And R-gen nanites for a Sniper? I wouldn't expect a Sniper to be needing too much healing to be honest, if they're any good.

Personality's a bit drab. I personally prefer insane baddies with maniacal laughter but whatever.

But guns! If you get in, we could do a shoot off sort of thing. My guy is a great marksman, after all, even if he is a medical man.

 

EDIT: Looking back at the OP, U-grade Nanites would probably be a much better fit for a Sniper. Upgraded senses would be perfect. Bonus to eyesight, detecting anomalies in the wind and atmospheric pressure and such, etc etc.

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Hey, DWG, it was because we were already into the story, trying to slide in a surprise new Starfell protagonist might take a little bit of thinking and work, and Torm requested to be one, although there is no guarantee he'll auto be one.

Hey Torm, after listening to the rest of the crew via here and PM, and discussing things with Kyng in another separate PM, I'll say some things:
• I'm against having a rogue Starfell or something, we already have one (That's not in our crew) (I don't remember if I revealed it or not already, so I won't say right now).
• The player interaction is going to be bad because you won't really be close enough to make any such interactions if Alexandria's actually a half-decent sniper
• I'm alright with maybe having been hired by Rebirth.
• The personality's bleh with me, but Kyng's alright with it, it's straight to the point and all.
• A motivation for evil would be nice with me, but Kyng doesn't need it to be disclosed.
• Also, considering if she would be a half-decent sniper, she would have to hit, and close calls all the time would make her almost a gag, if there weren't going to be player deaths because of another direct player act, which I say no to.
• It doesn't really seem to fit into the story.
• Other Info would be nice, but not required.

So, I'm sorry to say, but as of now, with all due respect, you are not accepted - at least by me. (Perhaps Kyng might) Perhaps if you make a better protagonist, or a better fitting non-Starfell antagonist that would be better in terms of the things above.

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Fair enough. I don't mind honestly. Creating a character to fit that sort of certain criteria was a little annoying to say the least I'm willing to give it another go. In all honesty It was a poorly rushed app as it is, I'd rather have a close quarters fighter. I'll keep you posted.

 

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"Some people have fought against me and won. Others have lost. Which one are you?"

Personal Information
Username: Tormented
Name: Rickon Antel Codename: Typhoon
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: 19th January
Blood Type: O
Nanite Type:T-Morph 
Hobby(s): N/A
[spoiler=Appearance:]1pyn84.png
Not much changes other than the fact that he doesn't usually have feathers around with him or the necklace.[/spoiler][spoiler=Personality:] Even though Typhoon is lab made he still has a heart, albeit a dark heart but a heart nevertheless he was genetically made to be the super warrior, he has no feelings for love and sticks to his goals no matter the danger. This often causes him with injuries or other attainments.
 
Typhoon is often known to be ruthless and unforgiving, he finds joy in killing weak fighters and more often than not could be classified as being a psychopath. He holds no religious beliefs, this is mainly due to his production of having no feelings other than towards his missions. 
 
Those who have seen him has classified him as being obnoxious, impatient and more often than not disrespectful. He has no need for idol symbols and would rather have them destryoed than avoid them altogether. His rudeness leads him to situations that he loves getting out of. This is mainly down to him just killing the person he annoys.
 
He is also very much informed about other people or situations that go on during the world, no one really has a thought why, maybe down to his employers who actually inform him of need to know information but whatever it is allows him to attack whoever he likes without them really knowing.
 
His cunning is almost without equal this doubled with his ruthlessness makes him an deadly adversary. His murderous deception always gives him an edge in taking down weak and feeble foes.[/spoiler]

Combat Information
Weapon Type: Guns and his Fists
Primary Weapon(s): A silenced pistol.
[spoiler="Fighting Style:"]Due to his constant run and gun approach to things he finds himself missing shots quite a lot however, the fact that he is a fast moving target also makes him a lot harder to hit and more often than not it leads to his opponents being face first into the ground.
 
Another factor to his fighting style is that although he is skilled he is limited to what he can actually do, with just a pistol and his fists he is usually out gunned, that being said he still makes do with what he has. [/spoiler][spoiler:'Secondary Weapon(s)/Equipment:] His fists and a few grenades. These are usually used when his pistol just isn't cutting it and something that requires a little more punch.[/spoiler][spoiler="Special Technique(s):"] Close and Personal: Suffering direct damage from attacks heals him for some of the damage taken. This effect cannot occur more than once every 3 seconds.
 
Sprint: Increase movement speed by 35% while not in combat.
 
Determination: Any effects taken from any poison, loss of breath or all around tiredness are completely removed for a short period of time. This is usually only used in last desperation moments.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Power(s):]Flame Sweep: Typhoon produces a burst of fire from his feet, he then sways it in a general direction and causes a chance of burning his opponents. The down side to this is that it is mainly inaccurate and only really works when he is up close.
 
Power Shot: Charges up his silenced pistol and fires off two powerful beam shots that deal damage. This requires him to power up the gun for roughly 5 seconds which could leave him open to attacks.
 
Death from Above: Rains death from above, firing a volley of missiles spawned from within him due to his T-Morph abilities at the target area, dealing damage over the duration. Standard and weak targets are knocked down by the blasts.[/spoiler]

 

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Soo... upgrades.

 

Right now, the only one Daena is planning to get is a new kind of dart.  A huge dart that extends to a flying blade-like thing, since she learned piercing attacks do not work on Theristes and she can't rely on the shooter all the time, since it is slow and unwieldy when used like that.  Basically, after leaving the chamber, the back of the dart splits open all the way down the center, until it looks like a curved blade. At short range it has more power (esp. if it can strike as the wings are opening), but the actual angle of the cut is unpredictable, so you might not be able to cut that arm off due to the dart being at the wrong angle.  As it flies, the dart-wing's angle changes to match Daena's arm at the time of firing, but it loses power. 

 

As I noted the darts are large... too large to use for Dart-Shotgun, of course.  When loaded, each dart extends up to just below her elbow.  She'll need to modify her weapon to use it as well (Mk III!).

 

On the mist front, I'm coming up a blank.  Well, due to the events in the story she could get knockout mists, which sounds ridiculous against fodder enemies.

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She can learn CQC from Toliet as well, increase what she is weakest at, then develop use of the gale thing as a jet as well, increasing the force of the gale module that by strapping two to her feat she has jet boots.

 

Also Smoke Darts. Darts filled with a glass capsule of her wind so that she can basically send the mist at distances, she is able to shoot it but so far only in either streams or bursts.The mist dart would allow for one to send a cloud long range.

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encapturer, approved.

If you want to add on what Jane says above too, that's fine.

 

EDIT: As for myself, the Pulsar Ray (laser thing) is going to be improved to the point of being a decent single-shot laser beam before a cooldown.

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Daena... is not liking the current turn of events.

 

"Hey, you guys did good.  Now let us get you some medical treatment and get you some good food and someplace to rest, and then some information to fight.  However we don't trust you, so you'll need to give us the ability to arbitrarily censor you."

 

Amusingly, if it just blocked the ability to talk about Sol Invictus, Daena probably would have been fine with it.  But the knowledge that someone out there can block what she can say even to her allies is a little scary.

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